surrender under gypsy stardust ~

surrendered under gypsy stardust,

   our dance an inflamed kiss 

skies impassioned the intensity

  of fervent moonbeam's heated embrace

filled my wildest aching desires

   within your ardor's fiery captivation

enthralling an enchanted sunset's obscurity

     knees went weak in a zealous fulfilled sunrise,

sensation's of endmost satiated gusto,

   shorelines met the heavens in exquisite divinity

breathless in the glory of worlds imploding,

  chanted to the gods on wind's splendor

rode the dark stallion until the

           resplendent bliss of night burst forth

                                 in contented ecstasy 

Author's Note

Andrew Atroshenko ~ Gypsy Painting

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

oooooooh back to the heat and spice that you do so well.. yum.... but you knew I would be melting all over this one... they sensual rhythm of the music mirrors the erotic dance of nature as it prepares for the naughty magic of the night.. love it... the word choice again is so deliciously sexy and palpable as it reaches out and tingles in all the right places... oooh yes ma'am.. lovely.. bliss... :)

[Frieda P]

Ooooh la la, another sweet review, gotta love when nature gets naughty. ;) Thanks so much April. :)

[AprilRN1210]

Yes ma'am. Indeed.. As always, my pleasure :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Frieda...we are blessed to read your etchings. softly, Pat

[light and ashes]

This is beautiful and so full of passion.

[Manasa.L]

amazing writing, an absolute delight to read.

[APOORVA]

liked every word of it.
commendable

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Fabulous write you have here Frieda.

[Saddam]

Fabulous one. For long time remembrance. Great as always.

[Lauriegirl]

I must say that this certainly captured my attention. You have such a clever and unique style all your own.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You never cease to amaze me, Friedalicious....

....moving and captivating at the same time...

I love how this passion burns through the night!

Truly stunning!~xoxo~:)

[JasminJoy]

The title captured me as well! I enjoy the musical addition as well as the choice of words. It immediately brought imagery to my mind