Reflective red rose Senryu

Dedicated to Red xo

Bled in old musings

red rose's broken heartache

dripping scarlet tears

Reviews

[redflutterby]

I can't express how much this has moved me. In this dark place I'm at you sprinkle love and kindness on me each day just by being there. But your words are like a balm to my torn heart. They say all I can't in three perfect lines...like you can see inside my pain. You are beautiful and amazing...and I'm humbled to have your friendship... thank you. xo

[Frieda P]

Awh Red you've touched my heart, always wish there was more that could be done to take away the pain my sweet friend. xo

[MAC]

not much of a fan of the senryu style, three short sentences (takes much longer to write than a free verse ten times the length) and the reviews are always much longer than the poem.

okay so I am done complaining now and guess I could say something about the poem but I won't just look below for wonderful reviews on a very well done senryu :)

okay fine....seriously this is an amazing and powerful display of love

[Frieda P]

It figures you'd sass
You are a pain in the arse
here's your *blank* Senryu!

read moreIt figures you'd sass
You are a pain in the arse
here's your *blank* Senryu!

I meant thanks muchly ;)

[Frieda P]

It cut off the rest of my response, I meant thanks muchly ;)

[MAC]

lol oh sure you did....since it is your birthday you get a free pass all day, from this point on anyway :)

[Frieda P]

Ha wow, I feel so special now... ;) By the way, don't tell anyone, I stopped celebrating around 33, it was a very good year. :)

[MAC]

smiling....1933??? lol you are special Frieda, a very lovely person no matter how hard you try not to be

[Frieda P]

Ha now that made me laugh, I don't have to try sweetheart, it comes naturally lol

[Matching Socks]

Very moving. :)
Must be nice to have your friend back. :)

[Frieda P]

It's a long road back, but yep, very muchly. :)

[AprilRN1210]

((hugs))... This one is deep and wide and painful and I feel it... sometimes it is scary letting those feelings that are so hurtful and dark out... but I always feel better when purged in a poem.. as always I love this... gentle yet powerful... just like you ma'am...

[Frieda P]

Awh coming from you that means a lot, you're one tough broad too sweetie. :)

[AprilRN1210]

well, we try don't we?
and thank you, coming from you it means a lot:)

[Lydia Shutter]

If I look through my old poetry, I can remember exactly where I was emotionally when I wrote a poem. I can feel the feelings again....and bleed the red rose's tears. Your words are so emotive and they touched me, Frieda. Lovely. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

I know exactly what you mean Lydi, it's like an old song bringing you back to that exact place in time, thanks so much for your kind words.