Reflective red rose Senryu

Dedicated to Red xo

Bled in old musings

red rose's broken heartache

dripping scarlet tears

Reviews

[redflutterby]

I can't express how much this has moved me. In this dark place I'm at you sprinkle love and kindness on me each day just by being there. But your words are like a balm to my torn heart. They say all I can't in three perfect lines...like you can see inside my pain. You are beautiful and amazing...and I'm humbled to have your friendship... thank you. xo

[Frieda P]

Awh Red you've touched my heart, always wish there was more that could be done to take away the pain my sweet friend. xo

[Fran Marie]

a touching senryu .... sad; yet so beautifully penned...

[R Smith]

you said more in 3 lines than I can in 33, a truly marvelous poem.

[Frieda P]

What a sweet thing to say, thanks so much Richard, muchly appreciated.

[R Smith]

your very welcome, your work is astonishing, beautiful.

[Frieda P]

Wow thanks you brought a smile to my poetic heart.

[AprilRN1210]

I am glad that you found her and see how amazing she is sir... ((hugs))

[R Smith]

you told me so and you were very right April...((hugs back))

[Daydreamer]

Invokes the thoughts...and touches the heart.. It's definitely exquisite!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much

[Frieda P]

...the cafe cut me off, nothing new, says thanks so much, glad you enjoyed and thanks for the stopping by!

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

broken heartache dripping Scarlet tears

I simply loved this I always see us woman
as roses my Momma is the yellow rose and sunflower
to me she's a Texas rose her blonde hair she has dark locks
like me so I look like she did in her mid 20's she was born with
White blonde hair blondes and Dark brunettes in my family
Olive skin and Dark skin :)




This really touched my heart it was
so beautiful about a rose the red rose
is my favorite.


Thank you for your lovely
review and comments you left on my page.


Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Frieda P]

Thanks for sharing Benita, glad you enjoyed this one. :) I'm more of a wildflower kind of girl, but I do get the appeal of roses.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome. I enjoyed the read I loved it. a single red rose means love and it fits me I am in love with love all I think of most days. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Sophy Freebirds]

The three lines are so difficult to write a plethora of emotions.But you have given the message superbly..The blood red tears weeped by the beautiful rose. Ahh... heart wrenching Freida.I could relate to it.So i got carried away. Thanks for sharing wonderful poetry. ★hugs★ :)

~Sophy

[Frieda P]

I love when you get carried away sweet Sophy :) Grazie mille....

[Sophy Freebirds]

De nada n***a ;)

[Sophy Freebirds]

De nada n***a ;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

beautiful, stunning and so sad...
jacob

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your kind words jacob...

[Marie]

You describe this beautiful picture so well with your scarlet tears of words...

[Frieda P]

Thanks Marie, muchly appreciated.

[Tate Morgan]

The old pains are always the worst they tug at us all our days. Well done

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Tate.

[Tate Morgan]

Of course you are welcome

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow, I am touched by this poem, and by the review by Red. It is amazing the bonds we manage to form in this place. I have been here only since last November, and it feels like a lifetime. My hugs go to you, and Red, and this lovely poem is a sad and touching tribute.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your kind words KL...I think revealing ourselves in our words brings us to a close bond that other people will never realize.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Frieda... memories etched in tears...
passion weeps in scarlet dreams...
rose petals floating... truly ... Pat

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Pat, I adore your poetic responses....truly.

[Patricia Wedel]

May your heart be blessed ...
May soft rain fall upon your quest...
Angels sing your song... truly

[Frieda P]

You're the best, thanks again....I like it better than my Senryu...