Harmony's moon ~

picture prompt

I have a strong desire to sit under harmony's moon

      bound by limitless possibilities & expectations,

quietly attune to all that is surrendered creation 

  sit and stare silently into the great unknown

counting stars of no consequence in sundered oblivion

        breathing in awe inspiring oceans and space

from another's generation's time and composed place

  imagining you were pining the same many moons ago,

and those who will savor this sweetness yet to come

  slowing the universe's pace to a stirring of peace

         joining all the constellations in effortless grace,

       the moon smiled back upon my face.....

                       and I felt her light fill my spirit

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

You nailed the prompt with pinpoint precision love, not that I had any doubt you could, you can do anything when poetry is involved...'counting stars of no consequence in sundered oblivion'...for all the serenity that follows, there is a lot of sadness in that line for me...stars don't tend to evoke such feelings, but the ending put me at ease to an extent...I have a sense of who 'you' is but I don't want to speculate, at least not here...but as long as you're writing, there will always be sweetness to come, whatever the mood or theme...I wish I could say more but this is one of those times when I can only smile and acknowledge your awe-inspiring oceans of talent and imagination...you were just born to write...100 limitless possibilities...yes I remembered :) xo

[Frieda P]

Awh, you touch my heart with your reviews Benji...I'm so glad you pondered that line, but I'm keeping that one to myself. :) Thanks so much my sweet friend. xo

[kublakhan27]

I understand, I thought you would anyway :) Always a pleasure Frieda...xo

[Daydreamer]

This is such an incredibly well written poem,Ma'am Frieda!!!! I was immediately attracted by the title and the entire read was just so worth-while and quite enjoyable! I've always been caught in this sentiment.... Most of the time I try to imagine my future.....
beauty,beauty,beauty.....

[lee von cleef]

Civilisation has ever developed the physical and the intellectual at the cost of the psychic and spiritual.
The command over and the guidance of one's own psychic nature, which foolish men now associate with
the super-natural, were with early Humanity innate and con-genital, and came to man as naturally as
walking and thinking.A Blavatsky Quotation Book compiled by Winifred A. Parley

[Frieda P]

That makes perfect sense, I think we've grown hesitant in our beliefs of self, and don't trust anything that seems too good to be true.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow, I am captivated by your words that are as beautiful and mysterious as the moon itself. My nickname for you Moonbeam is very fitting.

[Frieda P]

I knew there was a good reason Dale, thanks muchly for your glowing review cowboy.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Twas my pleasure Moonbeam.

[Matching Socks]

Appropriately named poem, it has the feeling of serenity, balance.
Great write Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Ance, glad you enjoyed my moment of serenity. :)

[Matching Socks]

Thx, any tips on making it last longer? :)

Would love to know.

[Frieda P]

If I only knew, and you'll be the first to know. :)