`once in a twilight glean‏ing ~

Your eyes a familiar vision of silent prayer ~

        once in a redemption's twilight glean

ghostly shadow's communing in reality

     movement of gravity touching in reverse

anamnesis in ascension's awareness

       unburdened of earthly nuances

essence of a spirit's reborn Platonism

moments flood a flawed legacy

   floating above Aurora's freedom

flowing on ethereal dimension’s wings

      whispers of familial souls hush the air 

resurrected sounds on high of angel’s rush

awakened in sensibility's sentimentality

herein lies the beauty of a new beginning

    songs that live on in a token heart's dream

Author's Note

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

Oh i look forward for this invitations as the anticipation of what will it be is palpable. And today an offering of the realms of the transitory, of the change I think the ondines comes to mind as the lines go on sharing with us not only are they responsible for the physicality of winds but also for the deliverance of wisdom through the ages. The language is soft yet very descriptive, the reference not all that intricate as I was able to find relationships a plenty. And the final paragrah that let's us know that the value of this experiences needs treasuring and appreciated in the most tender of ways.

Oh so tender.

Thankyou very much Frieda.

It is always a pleasure

[Frieda P]

Always a pleasure to read your reviews, you always shine a new light upon my words, thanks so much Rene.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing write, can't wait to read more of your work.

[B-poet]

Wonderfully written with a touching ending. Great Work Frieda. A profound write & read. :)

[AYVID N]

The overcoming of a flawed legacy and the attainment of freedom on ethereal wings to fly to a new freedom. She does it so beautifully....your writes speak so much Frieda, and with such sadness and beauty.

[stars are far]

that was wonderfully amazing work, i loved it ;)
thanks for sharing

[Cassie]

I have no review of this one, perhaps speechless is a review on its own...as always I love your pen

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is soft eloquence, written in such a delicate fashion...

"floating above Aurora's freedom

flowing on ethereal dimension’s wings

whispers of familial souls hush the air

resurrected sounds on high of angel’s rush

awakened in sensibility's sentimentality

herein lies the beauty of a new beginning"

Your words float in the air, capturing a certain divinity about it...

Excellent write, Friedalicious!~xoxo~:)

[Ruth]

Everything about this is divine...you are one hell of a writer hon xo

[NoelHC]

Complex concepts cascading continuously, I enjoyed this one a great deal. Well done again my friend.
One thing I am unsure of is if you meant to use "gleam" not "glean" in the first line.

[Parimal Pratyush]

You do know how to set up the mind of the reader while reading your works to get the message through. You are a true artist, one of the best I have seen in my little life. Great imagery and stunning words and beautiful music to go along with everything. A complete read. A masterpiece.