Poetic flip Senryu

~for April...

dıןɟ �"ıʇǝod ɐ

ʇɐɥʇ ʇnoqɐ buıppıʞ ʇ,usɐʍ

uʍop ǝpısdn buı�"uɐ

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

And this is where imagination and inspiration overrule logic and determinism. The mirror image is very clever and also part of the concept and the part where the sentence becomes personified it is also very creative. Frieda you are on fire (creatively speaking).

Someone better call one of the chipp - n - dales on a fireman costume.

Thankyou

[Frieda P]

Ha, thanks Rene, April lit a match under my arse...it just wrote itself! :) My son is a firefighter, he'd have a canary....haha

[Kayleigh]

This was very clever. It's like that picture quote that says you looking funny reading that. I will admit, my iPhone was upside down and side to side. Guess with the few glasses of vino I've had I got no chance!

Cute little poem, Frieda.

[Ashira Macy]

This was cute and clever. I must admit, I tried to read the upside down version first and failed miserably!

[Marie]

That sounds like a lot of fun. With a metal ceiling and magnetic shoes, I suppose it could really be done.

[Matching Socks]

Love the originality in this one. :-)
I must have missed the post.
The poetic flip, will that's clever in itself, I think I interpret that as meaning the our poems either by accident or design can be interpreted positively, negatively, happy, sad... Just depends on the reader.
Image is fantabulous.
:-)

[Frieda P]

Actually it was about me dancing on the ceiling, nothing so deep and profound but I like your interpretation muchly better! :)

[Matching Socks]

Spider-Woman...

[Frieda P]

Ha I've been called worse, back to black eh?

[Matching Socks]

Smexy doesn't count as worse. :)
Yes, black is a good colour for me. It's slimming.

[Frieda P]

When in doubt, go with basic black, yep. :)

[Matching Socks]

Traditional, classic. Goes with everything. :-)

[Frieda P]

Yes, you're very posh dahlin' :)

[Fran Marie]

a witty and cleverly penned senryu... with the mirror image poetic flip side up...
a delightful read which I enjoyed

[Frieda P]

Thanks Fran Marie.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh so very cool....and the song to go along with...

i like the mirrored image...

upside down or right side up, we are still dancing.

and we should try to keep dancing even when our world is turned upside down.

[Frieda P]

We must keep on dancing at all costs, right jacob, thanks so much...

[Lyn Anderson]

Well, this is entertaining. Is there some reason, why, when it flipped, the letters were replaced by " marks?

[Frieda P]

I don't know why the text does that, it was the best I could do....

[AprilRN1210]

It's cuz she is missing one of her stilettos... lol

[Frieda P]

HAHAHAHA

[AprilRN1210]

......:P......... had to... lol

[Frieda P]

The girls downstairs must think I lost my mind, I'm laughing so hard....haha

[AprilRN1210]

only fair.. serves you RIGHT... :P

[Frieda P]

Must be the site doing that, it shows up correct when it's posted....

...and you be quiet sassy spice! ;)

[AprilRN1210]

hey!! pfffft... fine.. I shall go back to my errrr.. corner... :P

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha that is hilarious.What the heck are you and April up to ?Whatever, it makes for entertaining my pazzo a*s lol

[AprilRN1210]

She HAD to get me back.. I admit.. funny as hell.. it's what I get.. gotta love us feisty sassy girls..

[Frieda P]

Ha was just having a bit o'fun.... ;) Grazie....

[Vidya Bacchus]

True that .I love you feisty,sassy gals :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome chica :)

[AprilRN1210]

LMAO... ok... you win... you got me... HA...HA.... you are such a hoot!!! oh my goodness girl.. what am I going to do with you ma'am.... You almost made me spit out my coffee at my dang computer.. I so adore you... YOU WIN... (this time).... :P

[Frieda P]

Scooby doo waffles!!! Ha I just can't help myself, had to getcha back. ;P

[AprilRN1210]

Yep... you did... you did... I'm sill giggling you nutter... oh my goodness...

[Frieda P]

Nutter? ha....now that made me laugh out loud!.....

[AprilRN1210]

Yep! only fair.. you had me giggling so much I almost choked.. :P

[Frieda P]

You gotta laugh, it is Monday after all.......

[AprilRN1210]

tell me about it.. well the imagery of you dancing on the ceiling will have me giggling all day, so yes.. grrrrrreat job with that one.. Think I'm gonna mosey back on over to my ummm distracting picture.... lol :)

[Frieda P]

I'll meet ya on the ceiling so? ;)

[AprilRN1210]

mmm yes.. let's see if we can stimulate him enough to join us:)

[Frieda P]

Ha I'm not touching that one, I think that's your job today. ;)

[AprilRN1210]

Lmao.. chicken... :P

[Frieda P]

I'm at work, can't get all 'worked' up...haha

[AprilRN1210]

ahhh, yes.. I have made you be naughty enough at work, I suppose.. free pass for now... :)

[Frieda P]

You're too good to me......... :)