~stardust'd muse

'vous êtes le poème'

      In my whispered, reverie's fancy ~

you are not the poet, 

                you are the poem

I am not the dancer,

             I am the dance

coupled by composition,

       fused in movement

unfolding on fluffs of

        cerulean cloud bursts

unwritten symmetry

            upon luminous skies

melding together 

on a flush of midnight

impetuous lightning 

       hits chord's emotions

strutting in pipe dream's

seductive whirl

intertwining in fated 

               interlude's musicality

soothing melodies tuned 

in like key'd motions

 

unfurled in connect'd breath's 

destined notes

gliding upon horizons 

of a canvas'd stage

glancing  unto harmony's 

designed vistas 

flung in the stillness

 of universe's illusion

touched within a

stardust'd muse's evolution 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful write here.



nicely penned thank you for sharing.




you are not the poet,

you are the poem




I am not the dancer,

I am the dance




coupled by composition,

fused in movement

Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Kindred poet, glad you enjoyed.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

its a pleasure reading your work. you're very welcome. Blessings. Benita / Kindred poet

[Debbie_Philly]

you are not the poet,
you are the poem

I am not the dancer,
I am the dance

So So true !!! Love this piece Frieda !!

[Frieda P]

Nice to see you back Debbie, thanks so much!

[Debbie_Philly]

You're welcome hun nice to read you again !!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Another outstanding poem, Frieda. :-) :-).

[Frieda P]

Thanks dear...Snow Angel it is. :) x

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome Frieda. :-) xx

[loverofpoetry7]

Very nice writing here...this was very well put together and I really enjoyed it the read and the style. Glad I stumbled upon this one

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, I'm jazz'd you did also.

[redzone]

You say not, but I think you are the dance and dancer attracting impetuous lightning,
strutting in pipe dream's
seductive whirl. Only you could unleash such symmetry in the the universe's illusion, only you could invoke such a muse that inspires a poem and a poet to want to dance on cerulean clouds...

It's a richly textured and romantic poem Frieda and I would love to whirl and dance on such clouds, even if only in illusion...
~~red(wearingsymmetricalillusionarydancingshoes)zone. ;0)

[redzone]

Since today is a "y" day and i have a why ... why hasn't your muse asked my muse to dance .. i mean .. ;0)

[Frieda P]

You're a gentleman Curt, aren't you supposed to take the lead sweetie? ;) Always ready to dance, you know that...thanks for your kind words my dear friend....x

[redzone]

My muse is always dancing and dancable .. so, bowing in respectful (trying
not to sound too too eager, which of course you know isn't true) anticipation, Dance with me Frieda, the muses are playing our song .. ;0)

[Frieda P]

I'd be delighted sweetheart....no twirling too hard, I'm already dizzy. :)

[redzone]

No, just enough

No worries won't twirl too fast and will catch you in any case .. i can do charming excitement really well and enjoy the way you laugh and sway .. ;0)

[Susan Beth Horvath]

What a lovely write..you did well communicating your heart and emotion

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your kind words Susan...

[Kieta!]

Wowwww :D This is so rich and descriptive! It's so beautiful and you did a fantastic job! :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Kieta, jazzed you enjoyed! :)

[Matching Socks]

Sweet romantic elegant beauty.
Adore this one Frieda.
I feel love in this one.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Ance, I have my moments....

[Lyn Anderson]

I love it! The first few opening lines are just wonderful. I tried to click on this last night while you were still working on it.

[Frieda P]

I was probably triple proof reading for apostrophallic mistakes....! :) Thanks K.L.

[Lyn Anderson]

apostro"phallic? " NOW that deserves a poem:)

[Frieda P]

See what you do to me, you're a bad influence!! ;P