I am trying to look for the right words but I can't find them... Your words broke
me down in tears as I read them over and over. Anger, pain and sadness were but
a few of the emotions that were tearing through my heart. This injustice goes on
but too many times and it's either unspoken of or ignored. Thank You for letting
your heart speak for all those who cannot.
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10 Years Ago
You said all the right words Luis, thanks so much....
not often am I lost for words (as you know) but this time I am, I guess your task as a writer has been achived ... you stopped me dead in my tracks !!!
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10 Years Ago
Wow, now that's quite the compliment, thanks Betty! xo
Wow! Didn't see that coming! Yours are beautiful words about a tragedy that no girl (or boy) should have to bear, especially in silence. I can't even fathom how this ever even happens. I have a daughter who's 13... beautiful and smart... and it makes me sick, deep down to even think...
Well, hell! I was having such a nice evening then KL post that and you post this... Now I have to think and feel all over again. You know, a poet is like a president, never a minute off... I guess I should just pull out the ol' fountain pen--I'm not going to be able to sleep for a while...
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10 Years Ago
Happens all too often...sorry me and KL ruined your evening, but hey, evenings are meant to write po.. read moreHappens all too often...sorry me and KL ruined your evening, but hey, evenings are meant to write poetry, carry on J.K. >>>>>>>>>>Grazie mille!
I rarely read two of your pieces back to back Mrs.R, my senses can't take it...your work is the soundtrack of sensory overload, yet I never want the overload to be lifted, and I know your readers feel the same...back-to-back does a job on my emotions too...somehow you pack the emotion of many anthologies into one work, I'll never be able to wrap my mind around that...from 'her safe haven' to 'hear no evil', the impact of those lines is staggering...I find my heart going out to this woman and her silent secret screams, my frank cynicism of 'beautiful' people is defeated...there's not another poet alive that can do that...you're probably thinking I'm over the top in my compliments, but I exaggerate nothing...you're the best, and I'll not be convinced otherwise :) xo
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10 Years Ago
You are over the top hon, but don't stop :) Thanks, you know how muchly I appreciate your sweet sen.. read moreYou are over the top hon, but don't stop :) Thanks, you know how muchly I appreciate your sweet sentiments and support my dear friend. xo
Haha I'm sure you'll having me gushing again in future works Mrs.R ;) And you know those feelings a.. read moreHaha I'm sure you'll having me gushing again in future works Mrs.R ;) And you know those feelings are mutual...the confidence I get from your support is immeasurable :) xo
10 Years Ago
You're sweet Steve, and I wasn't complaining haha :) x
What a powerful poem -- and the amazing haunting tune with it -- I love this, despite the painful dark place it comes from, but maybe because of it, it has a true, clear voice.
I think it should be mystiqued or mystiqu'd and eyed or ey'd ...
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10 Years Ago
Wow thanks K...yes, you know sometimes my apostrophelia addiction gets the best of me...
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..