Poetic purging Senryu...
A Poem by
Frieda P
Impetuous pen
slumming in ink's redemption
poetic purging
© 2014 Frieda P
Author's Note
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╰☆╮ooo, I like the title..poetic purging...writing definitely can help with purging one of their thoughts and feelings...wonderful job, once again.╰☆╮
Posted 10 Years Ago
And how I have purged...
..and will continue to purge.
Until the tear drops that are the ink in my pen have dried up.
Posted 10 Years Ago
And how I have purged...
..and will continue to purge.
Until the tear drops that are the ink in my pen have dried up.
10 Years Ago
I should have kept that line for a poem, damn...
Anyway, I think it belongs here.
10 Years Ago
You can still write it Ance....I've gotten a few ideas from reviews...thanks, go for it damn.... :)
10 Years Ago
We'll see. My pen is drying up... :)
10 Years Ago
Pish and tush, never happen girlfriend :)
A slumming pen, oh my Frieda no wonder it has such verve and potency.. only down here amoung the slum dwellers can real purging go on. Down here we roll the dice on a senyru and raise you two haiku and inky metaphor!! HA!!
~~ redzone
Posted 10 Years Ago
A slumming pen, oh my Frieda no wonder it has such verve and potency.. only down here amoung the slum dwellers can real purging go on. Down here we roll the dice on a senyru and raise you two haiku and inky metaphor!! HA!!
~~ redzone
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Haha Curt, I think I have a few extra inky metaphors for ya! :)
I really liked this one, and pairing it with this song makes it an upper.
Posted 10 Years Ago
I really liked this one, and pairing it with this song makes it an upper.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Sometimes you need a happy tune, thanks KL.
Yes indeed chica.We use our pens to purge ourselves of our deepest feelings.Most excellent pen my dear :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Yes indeed chica.We use our pens to purge ourselves of our deepest feelings.Most excellent pen my dear :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Yep and muchly cheaper than therapy. :) Thanks Pazzo!
10 Years Ago
Lol...that's true.You are welcome chica :)
Short but oh so powerful. No matter what you purge it is powerful. "Poetic Purging" There's a new title for a poem. ;-) I loved this!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
Short but oh so powerful. No matter what you purge it is powerful. "Poetic Purging" There's a new title for a poem. ;-) I loved this!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Grazie noodlebumble....you never know what'll come out of the pen, just go with the flow! :) x
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll..
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