~ dancing on tissue paper clouds

Silken thread poetry, woven on burlap

   suspended 'tween unwritten blank pages

wrapped in earthy paper bags

     cellophane ribbons of sweeping skywriting

         under lock and key's proclivity 

render'd of lifeblood's breath 

       exhaling secrets to the universe

etched on perpetual weeping soliloquies 

      satin kisses woke the sleeping monster

evoking slumber's artlessness 

                  of aesthetic's lucidity

    inky spirits presence in the flow

         dancing on tissue paper gossamer clouds

               surrendered in the word of poetry...  

Author's Note

Reviews

[willweb]

This was great Frieda P. It wraps itself around the reader and holds them while they read. Different but so beautiful when read aloud. I really enjoyed this tonight.

[Pure Innocence]

The eloquencey of your poems and phenomenal vocabulary are just astounding. I loved this piece and how you danced around with all the words. Fantastic job!

[Matching Socks]

This is so pretty Frieda.
Imagine all the little angels coming down from heaven to dance...
It's beautiful.

[Edward Lancheister]

written in the lovely words, that look great, my favorite line " dancing on tissue paper gossamer clouds
surrendered in the word of poetry... "

that's the best :)

[Frozen Eyes]

lucid writing vivid imagery your writing brings music to my mind.. good work ! :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your visit and review FE. :)