Forget-me-not dewdrops

   

She glides on the wings of flutterby verses

     shadows linger on the horizon

                                                    yesterday's rhyme a mere notion                                                                             cries blue Forget-me-not dewdrops                                  

under a indigo moon that flipped the sun

you can hear her as twilight whispers

   floating ever so hesitantly on a song,

    a darkly hued melody in the key of departed

Author's Note

Reviews

[s y e]

Oh sighs, flutterby gets me every time... I know the story behind it all and it tugs at my heart. You, my gorgeous Mama are truly a beauty and even through your sad words beauty is shining through.

// a song in the key of departed //

Oh man, my heart...... This was beautifully written and oh so sad, your heart was on the page. xoxo

[Arthur Henn]

This is AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"a song in the key of departed"

such a sad melody...even with the beauty of the background you provide here with your detail.

[willweb]

Still I feel sadness or loneliness in your floating poetry. Your writing style delivers these emotions in a beautiful way. I really enjoyed this today.

[Frieda P]

With life comes uncertain sadness sometimes, thanks Will.

[Matching Socks]

Beautiful, I have a special fondness for butterflies.
This one here is carefree yet maybe even a tad cautious?
It's so delicate and pretty this one.

[Frieda P]

I always had a special affinity for them also, even more so after my sister passed...thanks Ance x

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome. xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A simple stunning little piece of poetry Moonbeam, no wonder you inspire so many others.

[Frieda P]

You're sweet my friend, thanks Dale...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Did you call me sweet? What did you do with Frieda? LOL

[Frieda P]

Ha I see you have your smartass pants on again today! ;P

[David Scott]

I feel the butterfly kisses of a loving sister in this write...
Never to be forgotten.
Thank you for sharing this lovely thought.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for sharing the sentiment with me Scott....

[Baby Ricochet]

This is a lovely ode. Great poem Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Baby.

[Pryde Foltz]

Rhapsody in blue, my dear friend. Splendid write.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Pryde, where you been hiding, you've been missed....

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks Frieda … I'll be back in full swing soon … just as Bachman Turner Overdrive put it … takin' care of business:)

[redzone]

A beautiful song, a wonderful butterfly dancing poem for a wonderfully special woman... Frieda, this poem and your thoughts of comfort can perhaps ease some of the pain... and yes, I think she will "fly".

~~redzone

[Frieda P]

I hope so Curt, I really do, thanks so much for your continued support my sweet friend. x

[redzone]

She definitely is a sweet friend, send her my love as well ..