~ Bloom off the fanatical fire...‏

Beatifically blistered in your melancholic rose

darkly colored hue of thorn's ambush

verdigris trellis's trailing a sad window pane

bloom off the proverbial conformist flower

fanatical fiery force flipped a final formality,

sprinkled holy water upon the vine    

died a tragic death of subliminal exposure   

Author's Note

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

chills.... I am warning off these huge goosebumps all over my arms right now.. where to start... ok first off I love this song and haven't ever quite heard it like this.. I think that is what started the chills, but omg... those words... ma'am... you scare me with the ease and depth at which you affect me sometimes.. it is like your pen is a magic wand and japs me where and how you choose... quite unnerving... but also addictive as I keep coming back for more.. and more... You have such talent and not only for words, and flow, and imagery, but you are able to set this TONE, this ambiance, this MOOD, that whether or not we want to go there, by gosh WE ARE THERE... After you set your magical tone, then we are sucked in with such bewitching language, captivated, dying to see where you take us next, eagerly anticipating the ending.. and once we get there, we are in such states of awe... on a side note, you know I am a sucker for alliteration... can I just say O...M.....G.... I loved it!!! ok, I am rambling.. sorry.. see what you have done to me ma'am?... are you happy?... Ance turned me into a sappy, mushy mess, and then you just made me a goosebump covered, throbbing puddle of conflicted emotions with this one... I hope you two are happy with yourselves... I am going back to my corner, drink a pot of coffee, and TRY to compose myself... in all seriousness, this poem is dark and deliciously disturbing..

[Frieda P]

Whoa woman, you knocked my socks off with this review, and took my breath away...I'm framing it for posterity! Your words blew me away, I had to read them twice...holy April, you humble me, truly...thanks so much...! I'm deliriously happy right now, I can't speak for Ance. :)

[AprilRN1210]

well, I meant every word ma'am... I love the emotional journeys that you bless me with. True, like me, you never know what you are going to get when it comes to your writing, but I love that.. and you don't need socks to dance on the ceiling girl!

[Frieda P]

Ha, silly moi...seriously, I'm still elated from your words....woooooooooo!

[AprilRN1210]

I am glad... You deserve that and more ma'am... :)

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I loved your use of repeated first letters. the life of a flowering plant is fragile and you have transposed this really well.
Very good write.
Well done.

[Einstein Noodle]

had to save this one Freida! its just too good! your words and phrasing are incredible .. :)
E.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly E! :)

[Kleio13]

I`m beautifully blistered by this poem! K

[Frieda P]

Sweet review, thanks Kleio!

[Mélania Woolf]

Gosh ... I'm speechless !
Tragical yet amazing .
And the music .. wow !

[Frieda P]

Why thank you, I'll take a speechless any day...I love Jill Tracy, she's a bit quirky. Thanks Mell.

[Mélania Woolf]

I'm loving her,too lol
You never fail to catch my attention !

[Frieda P]

Listen to this one, you might not like her style...I adore her.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iyd1XUNQUNQ

[Moonie]

I love the aliterations you used. The poem is rich with teeming emotions. A gem indeed!!!!!=))

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Moon, muchly appreciated! :)

[Troy Henson]

As I peer through the window into this piece I feel pain and sorrow. This was a masterful write.

Regards
Troy

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Troy, enjoy your weekend...

[Ayushi]

A great round of applause for you.. You have beautifully expressed the pain and disguise ..
Very well written.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Ayushi.

[Avinash]

Wish her all happiness wherever she is.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Avinash....

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

OMG Frieda! :-)

Kaze~ :-)

[Frieda P]

Big smile here, thanks so much Kazie! :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

It was my pleasure. :-)