...another coffee Senryu

...another coffee Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P
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Good morning :)

"

Bringing sexy back,

coffee in the early morn

won't you java me



© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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won't you java me.

Killer Line Frieda My friend.


Not a big Fan of bring Sexy Back But wow
the video fit this write so very nicely of such
I say it was a good song for a sexy poem LOL...

I loved this I love Coffee this was perfect.


Thank you for your lovely review and comment
you left on my page and this wonderful poem.


Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Lol your review made me laugh, thanks so much kindred poet, yeah...it's kind of a fluff song but fit.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome. HE...HE. It's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet



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i like this little sip of sensuality.
and i don't even like coffee...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Think of it as hot chocolate :) Thanks jacob....
won't you java me.

Killer Line Frieda My friend.


Not a big Fan of bring Sexy Back But wow
the video fit this write so very nicely of such
I say it was a good song for a sexy poem LOL...

I loved this I love Coffee this was perfect.


Thank you for your lovely review and comment
you left on my page and this wonderful poem.


Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Lol your review made me laugh, thanks so much kindred poet, yeah...it's kind of a fluff song but fit.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome. HE...HE. It's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet
"won't you java me..." So, that's what we're calling it now, eh? ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

...and btw, while I still have you here, where's my margarita poem??! ;P
Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Ha! This site is driving me nuts lately - moving slowly, not showing all reviews at the top, can't .. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I know, it's making me nutz too..the other night I couldn't log out, all kind of fun quirks!
"won't you java me..." So, that's what we're calling it now, eh? ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I have no clue what you're talking about Rita ;) ha.....
A caffeine induced, mind blowing senryu of the night before....and now for ' afters ' Xo xo ?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

10 Years Ago

You certainly did ..... And some !
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Mission accomplished :)
Tom

10 Years Ago

Yummy, yummy !dc
This was.... hot, just like the coffee... Tasty too.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Kusa...
Oh yeah!!! ;)

I'll have that coffee anytime!...

Such an enticing senryu...

I like the video it's dark, intense, and Yummy (a bit of a silver fox)!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Well you know boys, they never grow up, so by then, at least they're somewhere in the vicinity...kid.. read more
Michael G.

10 Years Ago

Some of us just get grey and bald. But the coffee is still pretty strong! Nice work, my friend.
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Nice of you to show for a cuppa java hon!

...and I have no doubt. ;)
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ron
WOW. I would so love to Java...um someone ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ron

10 Years Ago

Wired? How is espresso wired :)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Don't you get all hopped up when you drink it? I had one in Italy once and nearly jumped out of my s.. read more
ron

10 Years Ago

Its very good. I like it strong.
Sometimes words are inadequate, so you'll have to do with an emoticon. ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

*wink* I'll take it ;)
I'd get in trouble if I really said what was on my mind...married and all...can I have a second cup please...a double dose of caffeine will clear my vision a bit better...or I just need a better prescription for my glasses...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You hardly need to after that statement Glen hah
Glen Yumang Manese

10 Years Ago

Just say it wasn't you..It wasn't me...just like the song...this must be AKA FAD talking out loud..... read more

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