Choices

~a quickie

Choices

...foolish to fall

deliberate to partake

subconscious to fail 

hesitant to move

wasted of devotion

inspiration to change

infinitely wise to leave 

Reviews

[Jack Cassidy]

Very broad and I think that works to its advantage. It allows the reader to form their own impression, which is important in all art. I imagine this will reach a lot of people.... K.

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you read this one, thanks so much K.

[Matching Socks]

I think the last line sums it up nicely.
Nice job.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Ance, just random thinking...too bad it takes so long to get to the last line....

[Matching Socks]

Funny how that works eh? But you need the context of the line. :)

[Frieda P]

It's an old story, just sometimes it's still fresh in my mind. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

I read this twice -- yes, subconscious is the failure, yet we must be conscious in removing ourselves from difficult situations. The beauty of this piece is it can be applied to life in general, and relationships, in a myriad of ways.

[Frieda P]

Thanks K, wasn't sure if that was going to work, and indeed it does apply to many of life trials....