Malformed metaphors

Blinded by an obvious dark moonbeam

  taken hostage in indecipherable lies,

invoking anomaly's enigmatic composed cries

 deaf violins tinkering on black piano keys

   conducting an objectionable poetic sainted response 

            erratically screeching tears of words

knighted in bended knee's supplicated excuses 

   disparity in past monstrosity's delusions

hysteria broke out of its straitjacket & lost control,

obsession turned on a dime's rhyme

   escaped to a dimly authored hole

       conformity stoked the arcane fires

              ignited within lunatic desires

discontented infidels spoke in tongues

   sun worshiping in turbulence of recondite winds

     whispered hush of truth's  malformed metaphors

Author's Note

Reviews

[Dayran]

A collage ... that puts together a selected bunch of curiosities ... that first draws our attention as fun ... and then as a storm in a cup. Reads like notes on a piano ... played at random ... but the order and organization of thought that accompanies the poem ... speaks volumes as experience. A fascination that is equal to meeting someone we have not seen for a long time. Tentative but interesting ...

Thanks for the invite Tate.

[Frieda P]

'storm in a cup', I like that, thanks so much for your visit & review Dayran, I'll be sure to thank Tate too.

[Cory Barrett]

deaf violins tinkering on black piano keys....

So jealous of this line.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Streamline, jazz'd you enjoyed....

[Baby Ricochet]

There's something mythical about this one. Cool

[Frieda P]

Oh I like where you took it Baby, thanks.

[kublakhan27]

Hysteria broke out of its straitjacket & lost control / obsession turned on a dime's rhyme...wow, those lines are killer...I've read this piece several times and it's bringing different things to mind with each read...this one is very Dali-esque to me Mrs.R...every line challenges me and pokes at my imagination...amazing work as always love...you're the best poet we have...xo

[Frieda P]

I just don't pay you nearly enough Steve...I told you, your Dali was rubbing off on moi! Thanks so much for your more than kind words my sweet friend. :) xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha The effect is mutual Mrs.R, you know that ;) xo

[Scott Metro]

You ignite me with lunatic desires...LOL..!!!!
Well done my dear..!!
Enjoyed it.

Scotty
xo

[Frieda P]

HA ha....I hope Nancy isn't reading this ;) Thanks Scotty! xo

[Scott Metro]

She knows I'm a lunatic..lol
xo

[Frieda P]

Duh, we all know that. haha

[Scott Metro]

You're asking or it sugar...LOL...

[Ayushi]

Commendable write Frieda..This one shows what a fine writer you are.
Lovely lines
"Blinded by an obvious dark moonbeam
taken hostage in indecipherable lies,"
Great write..

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Ayushi....

[willweb]

"escaped to a dimly authored hole" The poem was wonderful but this line stuck out for me. It was great. I really enjoyed this today.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Will, jazz'd you did.

[Matching Socks]

another one out of the ball park.
damn girl... moxy or mojo? not sure which. it seems you've got it all.
are you in a dark mood today? : )
xx (couple a kisses to make you smile-cheek of course...)

[Frieda P]

My moods change like the wind ;) Thanks so much, and especially for the kiss mwah! x :)

[Annabelle Lee]

hysteria broke out of its straitjacket & lost control,

this line made me grin

[Frieda P]

Look who's back! Hey Annabelle Lee, you've been missed...thanks muchly.

[writing mojo]

Ok you so you got a litttle mojo in you too..I love it!!

[writing mojo]

Damn small keys on my phone

[Frieda P]

Ha that made me laugh, I gotta a lot of mojo, most of it is in the vault! Thanks my friend. :)