Malformed metaphors

Blinded by an obvious dark moonbeam

  taken hostage in indecipherable lies,

invoking anomaly's enigmatic composed cries

 deaf violins tinkering on black piano keys

   conducting an objectionable poetic sainted response 

            erratically screeching tears of words

knighted in bended knee's supplicated excuses 

   disparity in past monstrosity's delusions

hysteria broke out of its straitjacket & lost control,

obsession turned on a dime's rhyme

   escaped to a dimly authored hole

       conformity stoked the arcane fires

              ignited within lunatic desires

discontented infidels spoke in tongues

   sun worshiping in turbulence of recondite winds

     whispered hush of truth's  malformed metaphors

Author's Note

Reviews

[Dayran]

A collage ... that puts together a selected bunch of curiosities ... that first draws our attention as fun ... and then as a storm in a cup. Reads like notes on a piano ... played at random ... but the order and organization of thought that accompanies the poem ... speaks volumes as experience. A fascination that is equal to meeting someone we have not seen for a long time. Tentative but interesting ...

Thanks for the invite Tate.

[Frieda P]

'storm in a cup', I like that, thanks so much for your visit & review Dayran, I'll be sure to thank Tate too.

[Happy hours]

love all the lines :) amazing

[Frieda P]

Muchly appreciated Anshul :)

[Happy hours]

you're welcome

[MsJewel]

hysteria broke out of its straitjacket & lost control
Brilliant use of metaphor
I like the way your mind works Frieda. It is always a delight to read your poetry.

:) Julie

[Frieda P]

It's actually scary in there Julie, thanks so much. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You lady are a true wordsmith.Your every line is perfection chica.Splendid pen for sure :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly pazzo! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Einstein Noodle]

true to your style, Freida .. every line a new and twisting treat .. your first line alone ignites a new Star Wars episode ... J.K. Beach says it very well and i agree completely :)
E.

[Frieda P]

Ha Star Wars, I haven't had that in a review, a first! ;) Thanks so much you wild & crazy guy! :)

[Troy Henson]

Loved this Frieda. Such a glorious write.

Regards
Troy

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Troy.

[Avinash]

Your words make human life Glorious :)

[Frieda P]

Woo, doing the happy dance. :)

[KWP]

I am happy to say I learn a lot when reading your words .. your palette is over flowing with fractured rainbow like words..

thank you soul sista xx

[Frieda P]

What a luverly thing to say, you've touched my poetic heart! Thanks muchly mwah! xo

[Mélania Woolf]

This is so rich , the imagery and the beautiful expression !
There are contrasts I also liked so much 'dark moonbeam' , 'deaf violins' ...
This poem speaks for the writer; mysterious !
It's a pleasure to read such a nice piece of work.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your visit and lovely review MellAnic, so glad you enjoyed!

[Mélania Woolf]

My pleasure ! :)

[cartera]

I sat here for at least three minutes picturing deaf violins tinkering on black piano keys and thinking about this image that is pure Dali.
Much harder to write this I think than you have made it look.

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd to know you gave it so much thought, thanks for the glowing review cartera, muchly appreciated.