You still manage to surprise me after all this time Mrs.R, not because of the subject matter cuz you've already proven you can tackle any topic, but the ways you get your messages across is truly something to behold. Distinct praises on the chosen, and the chosen only...it is unsettling to wonder who does the choosing, and what if it's society itself? Indifference's standing ovation underscores that feeling of unease all the more. This piece reminded me of the Dogs Of War by Floyd...prejudice and war are not unlike each other in my mind. You never fail to leave me feeling enlightened in the wake of a new poem...brilliant :) xo
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Awh Benji, thanks you're too good to me...and you know that's Mrs R's job sillyhead. ;) And wow, Fl.. read moreAwh Benji, thanks you're too good to me...and you know that's Mrs R's job sillyhead. ;) And wow, Floyd...I'm humbled! :) xo
People envy you,cause they can't be like you.They thoughtlessly criticise you.They don't want you to improve but they do it to prove you they are right.... very sensitive topic.Loved the seventh line.Nicely written as usual Freida.Barking dogs seldom bite,so i am safe from rabies ★laughter★
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~Sophy
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10 Years Ago
Mostly barking dogs are afraid of and insecure, not to mention annoying! ;) Thanks Sophy...
All are born equal and all fall short of glorious perfection, so your edifying words ring true Frieda, walk tall and proud for we are all special! A magnanimous write, full of worldly wisdom!
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10 Years Ago
Nice to see you Coach...thanks for the kind words!
Spectacular Frieda!
What a punch of reality this packs. I wish I knew why the world was as it was.
I blame it on the lies and false promises of the marketers and politicians, sugar coating every detail.
Yet when the candy coating dissolves you're left with a sour freaking gumball in your mouth.
MY standing ovation goes to YOU.
You still manage to surprise me after all this time Mrs.R, not because of the subject matter cuz you've already proven you can tackle any topic, but the ways you get your messages across is truly something to behold. Distinct praises on the chosen, and the chosen only...it is unsettling to wonder who does the choosing, and what if it's society itself? Indifference's standing ovation underscores that feeling of unease all the more. This piece reminded me of the Dogs Of War by Floyd...prejudice and war are not unlike each other in my mind. You never fail to leave me feeling enlightened in the wake of a new poem...brilliant :) xo
Posted 10 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Awh Benji, thanks you're too good to me...and you know that's Mrs R's job sillyhead. ;) And wow, Fl.. read moreAwh Benji, thanks you're too good to me...and you know that's Mrs R's job sillyhead. ;) And wow, Floyd...I'm humbled! :) xo
Hot damn, great use of metaphors, a great in your face poem and really for me is a great reflection of what the world is like when controlled by corporate greed.
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10 Years Ago
Glad you took it there, they're certainly HUGE offenders, thanks Dale...
I think that it makes no sense to judge others because who gave us that right?Are we better than another person?I think not.We sit in our glass houses and throw stones and are shocked when we realize we are covered with broken glass.Excellent pen for sure chica :)
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10 Years Ago
I agree with you wholeheartedly, too bad not everyone sees it that way...thanks so much pazzo :)
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..