You can rhyme. I thought you did fine. Rhyming ain't no fun. Making words run together ain't so easy. Always a pleasure to read your words. A entertaining poem.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Laughing here John, thanks for being so kind....I know I suck at rhyming haha
10 Years Ago
Me too. My poor kids had my poor skill for rhyming too.
Oh boy Frieda, you just knocked my socks of and feed them to the fox like they were loxs.
And for the record you lied when you said you can't rhyme, this poem is full of them, LOL
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Ha that's the extent of it, was fun to be silly! I envy people who can rhyme and it sounds great, I.. read moreHa that's the extent of it, was fun to be silly! I envy people who can rhyme and it sounds great, I don't think that way....yep, my pants are on fire in this one! haha
10 Years Ago
Well you know i am not a rhymer either, but this seemed like a fun contest.
10 Years Ago
It was, IS....where's yours???
10 Years Ago
Where is my what??
10 Years Ago
Loxs, soxs, take your pick, green eggs, spam and ham...don't mind me, I'm delirious after writing rh.. read moreLoxs, soxs, take your pick, green eggs, spam and ham...don't mind me, I'm delirious after writing rhymes haha
10 Years Ago
Oh yeah blame it on the rhyming, that is like me saying the devil made me do it.
10 Years Ago
I thought you were he...haha
10 Years Ago
...and don't harangue me in that tone of voice dear ;)
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..