~Kiss my tush, Dr Seuss

~Kiss my tush, Dr Seuss

A Poem by Frieda P
"

Silliness to knock Dale's Seuss off

"
You know I can't rhyme
but it's still all fine
in my own box
I'm sly as a fox
would you care to share
when life isn't fair
I'll read you here or there
in the cafe or on the lot
just give me all you've got
I like them with tears
or filled with fears
spicy and hot to trot
or downright full of rot
whatever your heart desires
jot it down and i'll be wired
        till the next edition
             I bid you adieu
for the last time,
I told you I can't rhyme 

© 2014 Frieda P


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Move over Dr. Suess...Frieda's rhyming in perfect timing!
I want to see what you can do with One Fish, Two Fish...

Love this one my friend!

just give me all you've got
I like them with tears
or filled with fears
spicy and hot to trot
or downright full of rot

Laughing out loud!!!

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Haha now you're pushing it Julie ;) Thanks muchly, it was fun!



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I really like this! I love the concept and the flow! Great job! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Michael! :)
You won't believe me, but you're a better rhymer than you give yourself credit for...as self-deprecating as this piece is, your talent refuses to be denied...you really can take any form and make it your own, and the same goes for emotions...I am happy when I read such works from you Mrs.R, I'd like to think you're in good spirits at the time :) xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the reinforcement Benji, but not really, I can do some silly stuff, but when it comes to .. read more
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Haha Silly girl giggles...that just sounds funny...try running that phrase through your mind and not.. read more
In a house
with a mouse-

rhyme is in your blood or it isn't but either way it's effective. : )

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

icelandicblue

10 Years Ago

LOL- it was so passe but I couldn't come up with a different drink without a menu. ; )
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Oh jeez, you're a lightweight, how about a dirty martini? ;)
icelandicblue

10 Years Ago

I am such a lightweight...but yet I try. ; )
I love this 'in your face' attitude about old Dr. Seus. I am a huge Dr. Seus fan, but you prove every day that you don't have to rhyme to be a drop dead awesome poet. Great job!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I love Dr Seuss too, and I'll leave the rhyming up to him and others that know their stuff hereinaft.. read more
you do fine with a rhyme just give it time and drink some wine so don't be shy and christ now i know why i suck now.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

This is the dimension of imagination...
Relic

10 Years Ago

You've just crossed over into...
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

the CAFE haha
This is a very enjoyable read :) Rolls off the tongue perfectly

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks glad you enjoyed my attempt at rhyming... :)
I am Laughing so Hard I simply loved this.

I love Dr. Seuss nicely penned my friend.


very nicely done.






You know I can't rhyme

but it's still all fine

in my own box

I'm sly as a fox

would you care to share

when life isn't fair

I'll read you here or there

in the café or on the lot


Thank you for sharing this Lovely Tongue twister and thank you
for your kind review and comments you left on my page.



Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Now you're making me laugh....my kids favorite book when they were younger was Green Eggs & Ham, I m.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

well He is an amazing Poet like many on here. What can I say I am a Big Kid at heart and I read Dr. .. read more
My writing has been compared to Dr Seuss. I like this poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

NO way, far from it Baby....thanks.
Oh, it's goin' down like THAT is it?
I gotta pass the Queen of Cute Fluff crown on to my girl friend over here...
Girl just rocked a rhyme... Right on time.
She's tricky tricky tricky....

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Yeah and I'm flippin exhausted now, my mind doesn't think that way haha......
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

You did an OUTSTANDING job. :)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks, it was fun :)
Hehehe... quirky & fun... I wrote a Seuss inspired poem once :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks sharonlee, you should enter it in Dale's contest.... :)
sharonlee

10 Years Ago

Oh didn't know he was running one! I'll check my archives.
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Just started today, the Seuss bug bit him...

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