You won't believe me, but you're a better rhymer than you give yourself credit for...as self-deprecating as this piece is, your talent refuses to be denied...you really can take any form and make it your own, and the same goes for emotions...I am happy when I read such works from you Mrs.R, I'd like to think you're in good spirits at the time :) xo
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Thanks for the reinforcement Benji, but not really, I can do some silly stuff, but when it comes to .. read moreThanks for the reinforcement Benji, but not really, I can do some silly stuff, but when it comes to serious rhyme I'm completely lost....Mrs R had a moment of silly girl giggles yes haha ;) xo
10 Years Ago
Haha Silly girl giggles...that just sounds funny...try running that phrase through your mind and not.. read moreHaha Silly girl giggles...that just sounds funny...try running that phrase through your mind and not laughing, it's impossible ;) xo
I love this 'in your face' attitude about old Dr. Seus. I am a huge Dr. Seus fan, but you prove every day that you don't have to rhyme to be a drop dead awesome poet. Great job!!!!
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10 Years Ago
I love Dr Seuss too, and I'll leave the rhyming up to him and others that know their stuff hereinaft.. read moreI love Dr Seuss too, and I'll leave the rhyming up to him and others that know their stuff hereinafter, thanks Star!
Thank you for sharing this Lovely Tongue twister and thank you
for your kind review and comments you left on my page.
Blessings. kindred poet
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10 Years Ago
Now you're making me laugh....my kids favorite book when they were younger was Green Eggs & Ham, I m.. read moreNow you're making me laugh....my kids favorite book when they were younger was Green Eggs & Ham, I must have read it a thousand times, it's no wonder I can't rhyme now....thanks so much kindred poet!
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well He is an amazing Poet like many on here. What can I say I am a Big Kid at heart and I read Dr. .. read morewell He is an amazing Poet like many on here. What can I say I am a Big Kid at heart and I read Dr. Seuss to my son when he was smaller also He's 14teen now growing up so fast and such a handsome boy a good Kid. you're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. I love reading your work. blessings. kindred poet
Oh, it's goin' down like THAT is it?
I gotta pass the Queen of Cute Fluff crown on to my girl friend over here...
Girl just rocked a rhyme... Right on time.
She's tricky tricky tricky....
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..