~Exhaled whisper'd whirlwinds

I drank in your desire, 

glimps'd in adoration's gaze

exhaled the whisper'd whirlwinds 

       of untamed memories past

    release in your heartfelt sanctuary,

        retreated on the horizons 

                  of transparent clouds

      nestl'd upon lofty sanctum's skies

 ecstasy 's moon collided onto lucent stars,

                 diaphanous sentiments of soft caresses

           feather'd embraces of Ero's empyrean bliss

    spirit soared on exquisite 

                  vaults of heaven's rapture

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack Wolfe]

Ecstasy('s) moon collided onto lucent stars, (did you mean lucent, it fits the stars perspective but better as luminescent) and then 'onto' seems a bit jarred, perhaps into.

I found this to be quite enthralling, though short, and the rhythm and omissions seemed right it was just the one line, I am in no way a poetic expert, so this just my opinion . . .

[Frieda P]

Lucent is shining and translucent, I preferred it, Tomato Tomahto ;) Thanks for your thoughtful review Jack...

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Brilliantly well written Frieda. A very passionate poem. :-)))

Kaze~ :-D

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful place and journey in your words. I need your poetry. Make me feel there is romance and passion still alive. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SmittyJas]

Well written beautifully worded Loved it as I read it. a wondrous Piece of works.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much SmittyJas.

[Baby Ricochet]

Some pretty ecstatic emotions here. Good one frieda

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby.

[Patricia]

A very beautiful and mellow yet passionate poem. Beautiful format as always and brings a lot of images of the past to memory. Again just lovely Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Pat! :)

[Patricia]

You are very welcome my dear friend :)))

[Chris Micha]

Very sensual and romantic piece, Frieda. Always a pleasure to read your work, ma'am! :)

[Frieda P]

Thank you Christian.

[sharonlee]

Ecstasy 's moon collided onto lucent stars... how sumptuous is this! Bravo!

[Frieda P]

Grazie sharonlee!

[Leslie Philibert]

This is well put together...

[Frieda P]

Thanks Leslie...

[kublakhan27]

Ah fly me to the moon Mrs.R...is there any emotion you can't bring to life with startling clarity? No, you've proven quite unequivocally that you can take any subject and truly make it your own...and another mythic reference huh ;) What more can one say, you're amazing love..xo

[Frieda P]

Awh you humble me Benji....I told you, you're rubbing off on me! :) To the moon, sure, Mrs R has never been. ;) xo