Irony's peccadillo refrain Kublakhan/Frieda Production

Bought out, not sold in transgressions wake
Too poor for the penny arcade
Too shy to advertise a soul to take
grievances upon a spirit's hot perversity 
in heavy metal silver black viscosity
Liquid independence sugar-free
choked the taste sleeping on rehearsed tongues 
to take control in metaphorical justice
Charlatan adrenaline rebelled, overthrowing blood
with directional discretion wavering like water
Bells toll in towers of recoiled love
holy water sprayed on tenacity's burn
genuflecting in the sins of the father
sleeping with the enemies sins
waking with a brain lapped by tomorrow's legs
chasing worth in extinct penny thoughts
Nails of falsetto on a swim 
clawed a scribble in eye's lapses
penetrated in unvital organ's ties
lyrically dallied on weeping violins
shouting on the hills of hallowed Bombay
epic criminality in restraints
saints and sinners busted the parade
Heritage incredulous to old ways
slammed the door on parallels
Ultimate destruction of direction
Smithereens celebrate a raise
Snow days on the valley of proximity
Why have you not heard from me?
The universe absolved my breath
faithful death took my curse
answers written in tragedy's braille
skies opened my eyes to be blinded
Hello silence my new friend
Underneath a scribble are the almighty elements
Circles only lock me in now
Thoughts settle on my head like apples
whims sparkle like bikini-clad wisdom
So unlike the time when knowledge sunk in
nothing made no sense
until the next voice appeared
Dissipate while you still have the choice
Flowered queen of shelter self-destructed
Adrenaline beat the pants off pride
Sojourned peccability into oblivion 
tempestuous winds burnt my skin
in turbulence of  history's poetic cries

Author's Note

Reviews

[Patricia]

Charlatan adrenaline rebelled, overthrowing blood
with directional discretion wavering like water
Are you kidding me? that is a great line!!!!

The universe absolved my breath
faithful death took my curse
answers written in tragedy's braille
skies opened my eyes to be blinded

Awesome lines!!!!

Sojourned peccability into oblivion
tempestuous winds burnt my skin
in turbulence of history's poetic cries

Fantastic ending!!!! great collab!!!

[Frieda P]

Doing the happy dance.....! You've picked a mixture of both our poetry's, Steve is going to be so jazz'd too...grazie mille Pat!

[Patricia]

You are welcome....it is art that two made as one and really melded together perfectly, it gave a beautiful balance and I hope to read more collabs with you two. :))

[Frieda P]

That's so good to hear, you've made my night! Grazie again. :)

[Patricia]

Well then YAYAYAYAY!!!! :D

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Patricia :) We practically wrote it one line at a time, and most of the lines have both of us in it :)

[Patricia]

You are very welcome, it is wonderful, it is difficult to tell which one is who because I have followed Frieda for some time even before I joined here so I thought I would be able to tell which was her words and yours but I can't so that just shows how well you two blended your talents together. I am mystified by the whole collab. I really hope you two do more together. Bravo!

[kublakhan27]

So glad you enjoyed it :) We've written several of them actually, this being the most recent...some are on her profile and some are on mine...we have an awesome time writing together, and we've always had a creative chemistry that neither of us seem to be able to define...I'm sure we will do more :)

[ms. barrie]

hi Frieda, I cannot even wrap my head around this...um wow indeed!
extremely erotic but carved with such intellectual intensity, both you and
Mr.Steve penned...the imagery is that of sarcastic passionate lava
leaving one scorched. this is what I call being poetically slapped across
the face.

amazing choice of words, as always and pleasing rhyming scheme.
this is one of my favourites from both you and Mr. Steve (likening it to
me trying to comprehend algebra) lol
now this is perfecto, stunning job to both you and Mr. Steve, Brava :)))) xox
100/100

[Frieda P]

Woo 'sarcastic passionate lava'...I could dance to that! Thanks so much Barrie, Steve will be ecstatic too when he reads this!! :) xox

[ms. barrie]

:))) you're very welcome, dance away! was a pleasure to read (ahem)

[Frieda P]

There's a poem or a song in there somewhere ;)

[kublakhan27]

So glad that you enjoyed our piece Miss Barrie...I am ecstatic indeed reading your response...I'll never be able to articulate exactly how we do it, but we always have, ever since we started collabing. Your support and kind words truly mean the world...thank you my dear friend :))) xox

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome, Mr. Steve...i think it's just when two
writing partners let their pens do a tango with each other.
be well, my friend! xox :))

[Brittany Zedalis]

Why have you not heard from me?
The universe absolved my breath
faithful death took my curse

This left me breathless with wonder. What an amazing piece!

[Frieda P]

I don't know, why haven't we? ;) Thanks, so thrilled you enjoyed Brittany!

[kublakhan27]

Thank you Brittany :)

[DrD]

You're so naughty, Frieda and you know how I like naughty girls. But wow, this was a rollercoaster work that I could imagine being said in a confessional. But seriously, a remarkable work that may appear to be superficial in its sexuality but cannot hide the enormous talent that brought it to us. A truly wonderful piece of writing.

[Frieda P]

If I'm naughty then Steve is too... takes two to tango, so jazz'd you enjoyed our collaboration Dave, and yes I know you bad boy ;) Grazie mille!

[AprilRN1210]

Wow.... ok, I may write steamy erotica that is meant to "heat" the body up.. .but... Oh My God! this felt like someone just took my mind for a ride and fk'd me good. Hot damn... I could fill the page up with my favorite lines from this piece.. This is FULL of amazing stuff.. and.. as a whole... it is MINDBLOWING... (closest I will ever get to a "blow job" eh?.... I don't smoke, but think I might need one of your "ciggies" after this... wheeeew!

[Frieda P]

I'm laughing so hard I can't type...I'm gonna take 'blow job' as a high compliment, it's my first, and I bet Steve's too....weeeeeeeeeee What a delectable review, I'll remember this one for always!! Thanks muchly April..........

[Frieda P]

Ha ha featured review woooo!

[AprilRN1210]

(giggling) girl... I saved this one for sure, going to have to "come" back for more :)

You're very welcome--what a collaboration you two!

[Frieda P]

I still have a s**t arse grin on my face, can't wait for Benji to read this one!! haha :)

[AprilRN1210]

Only fair since you consistently "crack me up" :)

[kublakhan27]

Haha I'm speechless after this most entertaining exchange...all I can say is thank you April, it always brings a big goofy grin to my face when I realize we can trigger such responses :)

[AprilRN1210]

You are welcome... I was completely unprepared for such a response... But jeez, what a ride.. :)

[Frieda P]

Payback's a b***h hon ;)

[AprilRN1210]

hmmmmm..... in response to that I shall add (stock up on batteries then ma'am) :P

[Frieda P]

I did after Tease.... ;P

[AprilRN1210]

Good! cuz after my next story you might NEED em.... :P

[Frieda P]

If you can top that I'll eat my red stilettos! ;)

[AprilRN1210]

ooooooooooh..... no you didn't just challenge me.... have I not topped each one I have written?
read moreooooooooooh..... no you didn't just challenge me.... have I not topped each one I have written?

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Damn Frieda you just blew my mind with this highly intellectual poem, you went for the gusto here. A poem I will need to read over and over to get the full effect, just like a great movie you watch over and over to get all the hidden meanings.

[Frieda P]

I have to give credit to Steve, he said he wanted to write an epic composition, so we were striving for something a bit different, I'm enthralled you enjoyed our collaboration Dale, many thanks!