Irony's peccadillo refrain  Kublakhan/Frieda Production

Irony's peccadillo refrain Kublakhan/Frieda Production

A Poem by Frieda P

Bought out, not sold in transgressions wake
Too poor for the penny arcade
Too shy to advertise a soul to take

grievances upon a spirit's hot perversity 
in heavy metal silver black viscosity
Liquid independence sugar-free
choked the taste sleeping on rehearsed tongues 

to take control in metaphorical justice
Charlatan adrenaline rebelled, overthrowing blood
with directional discretion wavering like water

Bells toll in towers of recoiled love
holy water sprayed on tenacity's burn
genuflecting in the sins of the father
sleeping with the enemies sins
waking with a brain lapped by tomorrow's legs
chasing worth in extinct penny thoughts
Nails of falsetto on a swim 
clawed a scribble in eye's lapses
penetrated in unvital organ's ties
lyrically dallied on weeping violins
shouting on the hills of hallowed Bombay
epic criminality in restraints
saints and sinners busted the parade
Heritage incredulous to old ways
slammed the door on parallels
Ultimate destruction of direction
Smithereens celebrate a raise
Snow days on the valley of proximity
Why have you not heard from me?

The universe absolved my breath
faithful death took my curse
answers written in tragedy's braille
skies opened my eyes to be blinded
Hello silence my new friend
Underneath a scribble are the almighty elements
Circles only lock me in now
Thoughts settle on my head like apples
whims sparkle like bikini-clad wisdom
So unlike the time when knowledge sunk in
nothing made no sense
until the next voice appeared
Dissipate while you still have the choice
Flowered queen of shelter self-destructed

Adrenaline beat the pants off pride
Sojourned peccability into oblivion 
tempestuous winds burnt my skin
in turbulence of  history's poetic cries

© 2014 Frieda P


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Charlatan adrenaline rebelled, overthrowing blood
with directional discretion wavering like water
Are you kidding me? that is a great line!!!!

The universe absolved my breath
faithful death took my curse
answers written in tragedy's braille
skies opened my eyes to be blinded

Awesome lines!!!!

Sojourned peccability into oblivion
tempestuous winds burnt my skin
in turbulence of history's poetic cries

Fantastic ending!!!! great collab!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Patricia :) We practically wrote it one line at a time, and most of the lines have bo.. read more
Patricia

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome, it is wonderful, it is difficult to tell which one is who because I have follo.. read more
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

So glad you enjoyed it :) We've written several of them actually, this being the most recent...some .. read more



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Ok D****t you are getting over my head I only have a 6th grade education you kno.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

That's amusing Tate, since it's a subject matter you know so much about haha
A complicated journey....
Well done my dear..!!!


Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

Jazzed you are you..!!
:)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

If I'm lucky enough lol ;)
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

peshawwww..!!!..you got it girl..!!
Oh my god! This is so long! :O
And amazing. :P

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

My nickname for Steve, the other poet who wrote this with me....he's a genius really, you should sto.. read more
Simran Kewlani

10 Years Ago

Sure, I will. Thank you. :)
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Simran :)
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ron
I think my brain just had sex with a dictionary...not sure but what a ride. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ron

10 Years Ago

I think I need a library now :)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I always love when I learn a new word...put on yer big boy pants hon ;) haha
ron

10 Years Ago

Oh there on and ready to..."Learn" new words :)
Nails of falsetto on a swim
clawed a scribble in eye's lapses
penetrated in unvital organ's ties
lyrically dallied on weeping violins

Superlative surreal imagery with this piece, you two.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Grazie mille Pryde....
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Pryde.
I am fairly certain that you two are a lot more intelligent than i am.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I think we're just a bit crazy Streamline, thanks for reading...
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Yeah I'm with Mrs.R on that haha...thank you Streamline.
Well I guess you two know ya'll killed...honey ya'll bettah WRITE!!!! It continues to trips me out that the two of you literally become one entity when you write and you can't decipher head from booty but I ain't mad. This is the stuff good writer's are inspired by. I'm bowing down and going to write sumpin.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha you crack me up dahlin....grazie mille!
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much my friend :)
Wonderful wonderful write.. You are hell of a writer ..
Keep it up :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Ayushi, glad your enjoyed our collaboration :)
Hmmmm, what does one do when too poor for the penny arcade??? Just ask Frieda and Steve!! Just stay away from the fun house and those mirrors, those abstract images just may blow you away... so boys and girls either save your pennies for the arcade, or keeps your eyes closed til it's safe... won't even try to say more, just ditto AprilRN.... SO Benji, Mrs R, is this all you have to say?? lol... ~~redzone

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Hahaha She even hears me from afar my friend...I'm not safe I tell you...well actually she IS the on.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

What are you smokin' Curt ahaha
redzone

10 Years Ago

I'm sure she does Steve, she is a special woman and you are in good hands...
Great write guys, and truly enjoyable read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Grazie mille A, muchly appreciated your kind words....
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much A.
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome...

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