Irony's peccadillo refrain Kublakhan/Frieda Production

Bought out, not sold in transgressions wake
Too poor for the penny arcade
Too shy to advertise a soul to take
grievances upon a spirit's hot perversity 
in heavy metal silver black viscosity
Liquid independence sugar-free
choked the taste sleeping on rehearsed tongues 
to take control in metaphorical justice
Charlatan adrenaline rebelled, overthrowing blood
with directional discretion wavering like water
Bells toll in towers of recoiled love
holy water sprayed on tenacity's burn
genuflecting in the sins of the father
sleeping with the enemies sins
waking with a brain lapped by tomorrow's legs
chasing worth in extinct penny thoughts
Nails of falsetto on a swim 
clawed a scribble in eye's lapses
penetrated in unvital organ's ties
lyrically dallied on weeping violins
shouting on the hills of hallowed Bombay
epic criminality in restraints
saints and sinners busted the parade
Heritage incredulous to old ways
slammed the door on parallels
Ultimate destruction of direction
Smithereens celebrate a raise
Snow days on the valley of proximity
Why have you not heard from me?
The universe absolved my breath
faithful death took my curse
answers written in tragedy's braille
skies opened my eyes to be blinded
Hello silence my new friend
Underneath a scribble are the almighty elements
Circles only lock me in now
Thoughts settle on my head like apples
whims sparkle like bikini-clad wisdom
So unlike the time when knowledge sunk in
nothing made no sense
until the next voice appeared
Dissipate while you still have the choice
Flowered queen of shelter self-destructed
Adrenaline beat the pants off pride
Sojourned peccability into oblivion 
tempestuous winds burnt my skin
in turbulence of  history's poetic cries

Author's Note

Reviews

[Patricia]

Charlatan adrenaline rebelled, overthrowing blood
with directional discretion wavering like water
Are you kidding me? that is a great line!!!!

The universe absolved my breath
faithful death took my curse
answers written in tragedy's braille
skies opened my eyes to be blinded

Awesome lines!!!!

Sojourned peccability into oblivion
tempestuous winds burnt my skin
in turbulence of history's poetic cries

Fantastic ending!!!! great collab!!!

[Frieda P]

Doing the happy dance.....! You've picked a mixture of both our poetry's, Steve is going to be so jazz'd too...grazie mille Pat!

[Patricia]

You are welcome....it is art that two made as one and really melded together perfectly, it gave a beautiful balance and I hope to read more collabs with you two. :))

[Frieda P]

That's so good to hear, you've made my night! Grazie again. :)

[Patricia]

Well then YAYAYAYAY!!!! :D

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Patricia :) We practically wrote it one line at a time, and most of the lines have both of us in it :)

[Patricia]

You are very welcome, it is wonderful, it is difficult to tell which one is who because I have followed Frieda for some time even before I joined here so I thought I would be able to tell which was her words and yours but I can't so that just shows how well you two blended your talents together. I am mystified by the whole collab. I really hope you two do more together. Bravo!

[kublakhan27]

So glad you enjoyed it :) We've written several of them actually, this being the most recent...some are on her profile and some are on mine...we have an awesome time writing together, and we've always had a creative chemistry that neither of us seem to be able to define...I'm sure we will do more :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing write Frieda. I loved readind this piece. :-)

Kaze~

[Kleio13]

tempestuous winds burnt my skin
in turbulence of history's poetic cries. Yes indeed. Lovely write

[Frieda P]

Grazie Kleio, jazz'd you enjoyed our collaboration.

[Kleio13]

Do you have a tumble?

[Kleio13]

I meant *tumblr*

[Frieda P]

LOL...Freudian slip?

[Kleio13]

Hahahaha never!

[Rita L. Sev]

I love the blending of unique phrases that results when two great poets travel together. Another great collaboration, Frieda and Steve!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Rita, you have no idea how much mix and match went on in this one, not sure where Benji left off and I begin! :)

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Rita, I can only nod and acknowledge what Frieda said...we spend a lot of time on these things...I think we enjoy intriguing people with who wrote what ;)

[Chris Micha]

Wow...blown away by you two, as always. I could see this as spoken word, it's that brilliant. Kudos to you two for a intense and genius collab!

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Chris :)

[Troy Henson]

Wow you two just nailed this...well done:)

Imagery flow and tone just wonderful :)

Regards
Troy

[Frieda P]

Smiling here, woo...you made me morning Troy, thanks so much! :)

[Troy Henson]

Always a pleasure:)

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Troy :)

[Matching Socks]

Two words: LOVE IT!

Great work you guys!

[Frieda P]

Best two words, thanks Ance!

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Ance :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wow you two always leave me in awe .Your lines melded seamlessly and what lines.I always have my trusty dictionary when reading your work lol.It is filled with such lovely lines and gorgeous imagery.You guys are the very best :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Vidya, glad you enjoyed our collaboration. :)

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Vidya, those words mean a lot :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You both are very welcome :)

[Lyn Anderson]

You work well together. A lovely piece, with great imagery.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much KL>

[kublakhan27]

Thank you KL.