Bought out, not sold in transgressions wake Too poor for the penny arcade Too shy to advertise a soul to take grievances upon a spirit's hot perversity in heavy metal silver black viscosity Liquid independence sugar-free choked the taste sleeping on rehearsed tongues to take control in metaphorical justice Charlatan adrenaline rebelled, overthrowing blood with directional discretion wavering like water Bells toll in towers of recoiled love holy water sprayed on tenacity's burn genuflecting in the sins of the father sleeping with the enemies sins waking with a brain lapped by tomorrow's legs chasing worth in extinct penny thoughts Nails of falsetto on a swim clawed a scribble in eye's lapses penetrated in unvital organ's ties lyrically dallied on weeping violins shouting on the hills of hallowed Bombay epic criminality in restraints saints and sinners busted the parade Heritage incredulous to old ways slammed the door on parallels Ultimate destruction of direction Smithereens celebrate a raise Snow days on the valley of proximity Why have you not heard from me? The universe absolved my breath faithful death took my curse answers written in tragedy's braille skies opened my eyes to be blinded Hello silence my new friend Underneath a scribble are the almighty elements Circles only lock me in now Thoughts settle on my head like apples whims sparkle like bikini-clad wisdom So unlike the time when knowledge sunk in nothing made no sense until the next voice appeared Dissipate while you still have the choice Flowered queen of shelter self-destructed Adrenaline beat the pants off pride Sojourned peccability into oblivion tempestuous winds burnt my skin in turbulence of history's poetic cries
Charlatan adrenaline rebelled, overthrowing blood
with directional discretion wavering like water
Are you kidding me? that is a great line!!!!
The universe absolved my breath
faithful death took my curse
answers written in tragedy's braille
skies opened my eyes to be blinded
Awesome lines!!!!
Sojourned peccability into oblivion
tempestuous winds burnt my skin
in turbulence of history's poetic cries
Fantastic ending!!!! great collab!!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Doing the happy dance.....! You've picked a mixture of both our poetry's, Steve is going to be so j.. read moreDoing the happy dance.....! You've picked a mixture of both our poetry's, Steve is going to be so jazz'd too...grazie mille Pat!
10 Years Ago
You are welcome....it is art that two made as one and really melded together perfectly, it gave a be.. read moreYou are welcome....it is art that two made as one and really melded together perfectly, it gave a beautiful balance and I hope to read more collabs with you two. :))
10 Years Ago
That's so good to hear, you've made my night! Grazie again. :)
Thanks so much Patricia :) We practically wrote it one line at a time, and most of the lines have bo.. read moreThanks so much Patricia :) We practically wrote it one line at a time, and most of the lines have both of us in it :)
10 Years Ago
You are very welcome, it is wonderful, it is difficult to tell which one is who because I have follo.. read moreYou are very welcome, it is wonderful, it is difficult to tell which one is who because I have followed Frieda for some time even before I joined here so I thought I would be able to tell which was her words and yours but I can't so that just shows how well you two blended your talents together. I am mystified by the whole collab. I really hope you two do more together. Bravo!
10 Years Ago
So glad you enjoyed it :) We've written several of them actually, this being the most recent...some .. read moreSo glad you enjoyed it :) We've written several of them actually, this being the most recent...some are on her profile and some are on mine...we have an awesome time writing together, and we've always had a creative chemistry that neither of us seem to be able to define...I'm sure we will do more :)
Charlatan adrenaline rebelled, overthrowing blood
with directional discretion wavering like water
Are you kidding me? that is a great line!!!!
The universe absolved my breath
faithful death took my curse
answers written in tragedy's braille
skies opened my eyes to be blinded
Awesome lines!!!!
Sojourned peccability into oblivion
tempestuous winds burnt my skin
in turbulence of history's poetic cries
Fantastic ending!!!! great collab!!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Doing the happy dance.....! You've picked a mixture of both our poetry's, Steve is going to be so j.. read moreDoing the happy dance.....! You've picked a mixture of both our poetry's, Steve is going to be so jazz'd too...grazie mille Pat!
10 Years Ago
You are welcome....it is art that two made as one and really melded together perfectly, it gave a be.. read moreYou are welcome....it is art that two made as one and really melded together perfectly, it gave a beautiful balance and I hope to read more collabs with you two. :))
10 Years Ago
That's so good to hear, you've made my night! Grazie again. :)
Thanks so much Patricia :) We practically wrote it one line at a time, and most of the lines have bo.. read moreThanks so much Patricia :) We practically wrote it one line at a time, and most of the lines have both of us in it :)
10 Years Ago
You are very welcome, it is wonderful, it is difficult to tell which one is who because I have follo.. read moreYou are very welcome, it is wonderful, it is difficult to tell which one is who because I have followed Frieda for some time even before I joined here so I thought I would be able to tell which was her words and yours but I can't so that just shows how well you two blended your talents together. I am mystified by the whole collab. I really hope you two do more together. Bravo!
10 Years Ago
So glad you enjoyed it :) We've written several of them actually, this being the most recent...some .. read moreSo glad you enjoyed it :) We've written several of them actually, this being the most recent...some are on her profile and some are on mine...we have an awesome time writing together, and we've always had a creative chemistry that neither of us seem to be able to define...I'm sure we will do more :)
I love the blending of unique phrases that results when two great poets travel together. Another great collaboration, Frieda and Steve!
Posted 10 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks so much Rita, you have no idea how much mix and match went on in this one, not sure where Ben.. read moreThanks so much Rita, you have no idea how much mix and match went on in this one, not sure where Benji left off and I begin! :)
10 Years Ago
Thanks so much Rita, I can only nod and acknowledge what Frieda said...we spend a lot of time on the.. read moreThanks so much Rita, I can only nod and acknowledge what Frieda said...we spend a lot of time on these things...I think we enjoy intriguing people with who wrote what ;)
Wow you two always leave me in awe .Your lines melded seamlessly and what lines.I always have my trusty dictionary when reading your work lol.It is filled with such lovely lines and gorgeous imagery.You guys are the very best :)
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..