Irony's peccadillo refrain  Kublakhan/Frieda Production

Irony's peccadillo refrain Kublakhan/Frieda Production

A Poem by Frieda P

Bought out, not sold in transgressions wake
Too poor for the penny arcade
Too shy to advertise a soul to take

grievances upon a spirit's hot perversity 
in heavy metal silver black viscosity
Liquid independence sugar-free
choked the taste sleeping on rehearsed tongues 

to take control in metaphorical justice
Charlatan adrenaline rebelled, overthrowing blood
with directional discretion wavering like water

Bells toll in towers of recoiled love
holy water sprayed on tenacity's burn
genuflecting in the sins of the father
sleeping with the enemies sins
waking with a brain lapped by tomorrow's legs
chasing worth in extinct penny thoughts
Nails of falsetto on a swim 
clawed a scribble in eye's lapses
penetrated in unvital organ's ties
lyrically dallied on weeping violins
shouting on the hills of hallowed Bombay
epic criminality in restraints
saints and sinners busted the parade
Heritage incredulous to old ways
slammed the door on parallels
Ultimate destruction of direction
Smithereens celebrate a raise
Snow days on the valley of proximity
Why have you not heard from me?

The universe absolved my breath
faithful death took my curse
answers written in tragedy's braille
skies opened my eyes to be blinded
Hello silence my new friend
Underneath a scribble are the almighty elements
Circles only lock me in now
Thoughts settle on my head like apples
whims sparkle like bikini-clad wisdom
So unlike the time when knowledge sunk in
nothing made no sense
until the next voice appeared
Dissipate while you still have the choice
Flowered queen of shelter self-destructed

Adrenaline beat the pants off pride
Sojourned peccability into oblivion 
tempestuous winds burnt my skin
in turbulence of  history's poetic cries

© 2014 Frieda P


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Charlatan adrenaline rebelled, overthrowing blood
with directional discretion wavering like water
Are you kidding me? that is a great line!!!!

The universe absolved my breath
faithful death took my curse
answers written in tragedy's braille
skies opened my eyes to be blinded

Awesome lines!!!!

Sojourned peccability into oblivion
tempestuous winds burnt my skin
in turbulence of history's poetic cries

Fantastic ending!!!! great collab!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Patricia :) We practically wrote it one line at a time, and most of the lines have bo.. read more
Patricia

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome, it is wonderful, it is difficult to tell which one is who because I have follo.. read more
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

So glad you enjoyed it :) We've written several of them actually, this being the most recent...some .. read more



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Amazing write Frieda. I loved readind this piece. :-)

Kaze~

Posted 10 Years Ago


tempestuous winds burnt my skin
in turbulence of history's poetic cries. Yes indeed. Lovely write

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kleio13

10 Years Ago

I meant *tumblr*
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

LOL...Freudian slip?
Kleio13

10 Years Ago

Hahahaha never!
Charlatan adrenaline rebelled, overthrowing blood
with directional discretion wavering like water
Are you kidding me? that is a great line!!!!

The universe absolved my breath
faithful death took my curse
answers written in tragedy's braille
skies opened my eyes to be blinded

Awesome lines!!!!

Sojourned peccability into oblivion
tempestuous winds burnt my skin
in turbulence of history's poetic cries

Fantastic ending!!!! great collab!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Patricia :) We practically wrote it one line at a time, and most of the lines have bo.. read more
Patricia

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome, it is wonderful, it is difficult to tell which one is who because I have follo.. read more
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

So glad you enjoyed it :) We've written several of them actually, this being the most recent...some .. read more
I love the blending of unique phrases that results when two great poets travel together. Another great collaboration, Frieda and Steve!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Rita, you have no idea how much mix and match went on in this one, not sure where Ben.. read more
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Rita, I can only nod and acknowledge what Frieda said...we spend a lot of time on the.. read more
Wow...blown away by you two, as always. I could see this as spoken word, it's that brilliant. Kudos to you two for a intense and genius collab!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Chris :)
Wow you two just nailed this...well done:)

Imagery flow and tone just wonderful :)

Regards
Troy

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Smiling here, woo...you made me morning Troy, thanks so much! :)
Troy Henson

10 Years Ago

Always a pleasure:)
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Troy :)
Two words: LOVE IT!

Great work you guys!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Best two words, thanks Ance!
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Ance :)
Wow you two always leave me in awe .Your lines melded seamlessly and what lines.I always have my trusty dictionary when reading your work lol.It is filled with such lovely lines and gorgeous imagery.You guys are the very best :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Vidya, glad you enjoyed our collaboration. :)
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Vidya, those words mean a lot :)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You both are very welcome :)
You work well together. A lovely piece, with great imagery.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much KL>
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Thank you KL.

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