`swallow...

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Your toxicity went down so nice

~ the poison that delivered,

             gave you a trillion tries

your intention'd deception

lodge'd in my swelling,

                 throaty escape

caught between a swallow & a cry

only saving grace,

chances are...

 now she's sucking you dry 

Author's Note

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

Hmmmm, maybe I am "off".... I know my mind works in the off-beaten path, but I didn't get naughty in this one.. I got an ouch! Karma is a wonderful thing... anyways whether it was the meaning you intended or not, I like where my mind took me on this one.. nice..

[Wórdsmíth]

Opps.. Is it really you, Frieda?? Lol I really didn`t expect to read such naughty pieces from you but now i`m glad to know your talent`s like a wind .. a bit here and a bit there. Wonderful poem, Frieda ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I think this poem could be taken a few ways, but being the naughty cowboy that I am I see it as, well I think you know.

[Frieda P]

Funny you should mention that Dale....

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh yeah, why is it funny?

[Frieda P]

You're the first one who mentioned it...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

What can I say, my mind has a mind of its own, LOL

[Frieda P]

I guess I'm on that wave length too...haha

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Dirty minds think alike.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Awesome poetry lines. I like the message and the way it develops.

[Frieda P]

Thanks, muchly appreciated.

[Matching Socks]

Lol!!

THIS
IS
AWESOME!

Nice one!

[Frieda P]

Grazie!! I guess you felt the pain too...haha ;)

[Lyn Anderson]

YESS! Loved this one. Of course SHE IS ha ha! And that, is poetic justice, my friend, you delivered it!
One thing, I was so excited I forgot to say lodg'd? as opposed to lodge'd or just lodged? Just trying to follow your apostrophetic artistry.:)

[Frieda P]

Haha you've got me laughing out loud here....!

[s y e]

Oh damn... was there really any need for that punch? I know I'm cheeky and all but you lub me really ;-) Admit it... HA!

On a serious note, damn that was powerful. Definitely got a ooooft and wowcha from me! xoxo

[Frieda P]

Cheeky indeed, you shouldn't even know what it means...lassie ;) xo

[s y e]

That's what happens when I am your daughter! ;-)

[Madalyn Beck]

This is a wicked write and definitely packs a powerful punch! Brilliant job with this! xo :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks, I was actually listening to Emile Autumn's Swallow and this came to mind, I'm a plague rat ha ;) xo

[sharonlee]

Wickedly Potent! Sounds like a deal with a devil!

[Frieda P]

Was feeling wicked sharonlee, thanks so much!