~dance within the soul

You dance within the soul,

             make it hum so sweetly

songs from a nectar'd god

   as hips sway to reach your moon

           swathing bodies in divine Ecstasy 

      dawn's light dims in comparison

 Aphrodite in whisper'd yearning,

            of Sappho's lyrical adulated whimsy

         took bittersweet allusion's breath away

 joyful recognition echo'd the skies's breezes 

      written on favor'd clouds of surrender

               mesmerized in your explosive eclipses

    enraptur'd frenzy of poetic inspiration

                

breathe you in as a summer's day rising

                             unrelenting abandon of all senses 

Author's Note

captcha ~ misword

Reviews

[redzone]

Listening to this wonderful music you chose and being mesmerized by the words you have written, thinking about the way Sappho wove galaxies into her love poems and with Aphrodite it was her look and touch... but neither of them could pull me into that swirling galactic center where I found a poem, an "enraptur'd frenzy of poetic inspiration" and a desire to dance...

WOW Frieda, wait a second I must catch my breath, sorry, I'm still floating toward the inner star as words continue to echo and inspire... WOW!!
~~redzone

[redzone]

Captcha is full of bull crappy, no miswords here ;0)

[Frieda P]

Wooo, you just put a huge smile on my face sir, grazie mille Curt! MWAH! x

[Scott Metro]

Beautiful words flowing into verse..dances..!!

Scotty
xo

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Scotty!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You paint so many pictures with your magic pen Chica.Truly beautiful :)

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille pazzo :) x

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome chica :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the energy and the movement of the words. Good to dance freely in the palm of Nature. I had to read again. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Always dancing, thanks John...

[Troy Henson]

This was an absolute dream to read Frieda.

Regards
Troy

[Frieda P]

You brought a smile to my heart dear Troy, thanks so much.

[Latifa]

amazing and beautiful Frieda, this one is one of your best

[Frieda P]

Wow thanks so much Latifa, muchly appreciated...

[Madalyn Beck]

I agree with Shirlena! I felt like I was under a spell reading this one! Brilliant job with this! I love this line:

"mesmerized in your explosive eclipses"

Beautifully penned, my Frieda! xo :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks, so jazz'd you enjoyed this one Mads! :) xo

[Cassie]

Hey girl, this is really penned right. I enjoyed reading

[Frieda P]

Thanks Cassie, you've been missed married lady!

[Ayushi]

"mesmerized in your explosive eclipses
enraptur'd frenzy of poetic inspiration
breathe you in as a summer's day rising
unrelenting abandon of all senses "

Sensual, soothing and divine love.. Lovely :)

[Frieda P]

Ahh love 'divine'...thanks muchly :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the muse certainly dances within your soul, Frieda...

"explosive eclipses" such phrasing...celestial poetry here.

[Frieda P]

What a delightful thought jacob, thanks so much...

[David Scott]

A sensual slow dance rather than your usual tango. Reads like a song you never want to end... Beautifully done.

[Frieda P]

Sometimes you just have to s l o w it down, thanks muchly dear Scott.