Betrayal Acrostic

Belligerent, backstabbing

Echoes 

Traipsing 

Rage's

Assumptions & accusations

Yielded

After

Lies      

Author's Note

Reviews

[00000000000000000000000..]

I agree 100% in all, the only friends I really have are on here. It sounds weird I know don't have any in person. To me a real friend cares calls comes by emails from time to time. Nope don't have that but its ok because I am my own best friend:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Jon, at least you can't stab your own self in the back :)

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Your welcome my friend:) naw I cant reach back their right now if I wanted too lol!!! ha ha:)

[kublakhan27]

I'm with you on this one Mrs.R...I know betrayal, what can I say...I always like seeing new forms and styles from you though...you're more diverse than you think :) Powerful words...I definitely felt this one...xo

[Frieda P]

It's sad that so many can relate, thanks so much Benji xo

[ms. barrie]

amazing write Frieda...very relatable and written with
compelling eloquence
very true...my betrayals have come.from.most of.my
"friends" - claiming to be my closet or otherwise.
no.longer do I believe in one's words
like my mama always told me, actions speak louder! :)

thanks for sharing!

[redflutterby]

Very wise mama!! Mine said the same thing..eventually we take that lesson to heart. Or let people walk all over us.

[ms. barrie]

thank you Red...yes unfortunately her daughter's heart is not
the brightest crayon in the box till now! I'll be sure to visit your
writes after I feel better. take care :)

[redflutterby]

Take your time...not writing much these days. Sometimes we just give tooany people the benefit of the doubt.

[ms. barrie]

yes we do...and likewise! :))

[Frieda P]

True indeed, we know what to expect from our enemies, but when a friend stabs us in the back, that freaking hurts....thanks for your thoughts Barrie.

[Tree]

Loyalty is far rarer, than our species like to give itself credit for, still, we keep searching, probing for friends and relationships in which we could trust. But it helps too, when we don't think of it as so black and white, but layered, and complicated. But lol I prefer black and white, less margin for error; less room, for hurt.
Thank you for sharing.

[Frieda P]

Tis a crying shame that it's so rare Diego, I tend to prefer black and white most times myself...the gray gets really messy ha....thanks for your kind words.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ahhh truer words were never spoken.Damn backstabbers I have felt their sharp blade but never again.Great pen girl:)

[Frieda P]

Yep damn them, we say never again but never see it coming when it happens, thanks pazzo :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

True that but why are we so gullible they catch us as soon as we turn our backs sheesh!!!

[Frieda P]

Don't have the answer to that one pazzo..........!

[Sami Khalil]

You have nailed it with these points. Thank you for sharing...:)....................

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Sami. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)......................

[Lyn Anderson]

Bravo my darling. Every once in a while I get stuck in a rut and start thinking about deer season being just around the corner ...

[Frieda P]

Ahh I like your thoughts...that's a whole other poem ;)

[Marie]

Great acrostic Frieda. All true.Enemies have already betrayed you; you know you can't trut them.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Marie....

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Hmm... I know how this feels in reality and also had it with online friends too never on WC though always somewhere else but I've left that place behind.


I had 2 Childhood friends that changed that I was close to and I
was that sweet unselfish soul my momma raised me to be they turned
into the lusts of the world they became spoiled and wanted the poplar
lime light of attention it hurt but I moved on long time ago I have a poem
I did about a online friend that hurt me but I was never apart of WC at the time
never been Burned by no one on here it doesn't Phase me as much since I've learned
who is my friends and who isn't and I have many Amazing friends on here and they're
beautiful people inside and out I still have some childhood friends that stuck by my side in my home town
that suck by my side through the good and bad times and we still talk till this day but I believe some are meant to stay and other friends are not if they're fake plastic friends not real with you and I see you as an amazing friend and anything you ask about me I will tell you the truth I won't lie and you can have my back even though I am miles away.



But you're very right my friend thank you for this and your lovely review and comment.

Blessings. kindred poet

[Frieda P]

Sorry to hear that kindred poet, seems to happen to the best of us.....thanks for your thoughts here.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. well I had to move on I still have some pretty Great friends :) on and offline that always stick by my side. blessings. kindred poet

[redflutterby]

Know this all too well....sigh. Its a sad part of life and i have the scars to prove it. You nailed it perfectly!

[Frieda P]

Sigh, sadly it is so...thanks muchly red! x