Whisper'd dreaming ~

I dreamt a lofty dream of you,

strength of a mountain lion

warmth of a summer's night

whispers crept into my thoughts

upon cool defiant breezes

in sultry rebellion

surging as a powerful tsunami

stirring me further

in my chimera's intentions

adrift on a submissive ocean

drowning in pleasure

currents taking my breath away...

Awoken within a satiated sea

 floating amidst ~

 feverish puddles of lust

Author's Note

Artwork ~ Josephine Wall

Reviews

[redzone]

Holy feverish puddles of lust Frieda, Now THAT was a dream and it seems that somehow your tsunami just washed through the screen and I am all soaked with your dream.. not complaining, I'm just going to enjoy your words for a very long time... wanna get wet and squishy Frieda.. er.. did I just say that...;0) oh hell, it was that cool defiant breeze and children's intentions and and... wow Frieda, what a wonderfully romantic (and lustful) poem... I love it
~~redzone xxoo

[Frieda P]

Ha hope it wasn't too messy Curt, thanks hon! ;-) MWAH! x

[redzone]

I like messy Frieda. Like, where did children's come from when i typed chimeras intention??? But i suspect you made me messy, hurled that tsunami on purpose .. I'm still wet by the way HA! I can see you sitting there saying, there, take that mr zone head, smiling that sweet face smile you have.... yep it's all clear now. ;0) MWAH!! Ok now come over here so i can share this wetness .. lol

[Madalyn Beck]

Now there's a dream! Hahaha! I love the words you used here and the power of passion rolling off this piece! Fantastic imagery. Steamy dream session! Wowza! Great job, my dear, Frieda! xo :)

[Frieda P]

Ha see, not always dark Mads! A friend of mine brought to my attention, that I always write a light one after the darkly colored ones, or vice versa, he was right....grazie mille! :-) xo

[Lyn Anderson]

Only you can make the nasty sound so nearly clean ...:)

[Frieda P]

Laughing here, what nasty? haha ;-)

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh I guess it was a rain storm that ended in puddles, my bad :)

[Frieda P]

Exactly....ha, how could you evah be bad?! ;-)

[Lyn Anderson]

a submissive ocean -- hmmm, where does one catch the boat for that?

[Frieda P]

Belize me thinks..........

[Sami Khalil]

Powerful message and imagery used in this poem to deliver the utmost dream. The dream has satiated so many souls. Excellent...:)....................

[Frieda P]

Don't you just love that word, satiated? Thanks muchly Sami! :-)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)...................

[David Scott]

The last three lines were perfect!
I loved the way you left me here... ;)
A dream to dream of dreaming I think.

[Frieda P]

I thought I left you dreaming, or so I hoped Scott. ;-) Grazie.....x

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Sexy ink scrolled with emotional ties~

[Frieda P]

Ooo I like that, thanks so much Josie!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well I would not find myself wanting to wake up from that particular dream.This is so beautiful and lovely chica :)

[Frieda P]

First one would have to be able to sleep though ha....grazie pazzo! ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol.....true that.You my dearest are very welcome :)

[redflutterby]

Well now....sounds like quite the dream!! Chimera eh?? Lol... whatcha been eating before bed time hun?? Stay away from that fruit bat soup!! Ha...;-)xo

[Frieda P]

LOL I caught this on live feed! The bat's not shaved either ;-P x

[redflutterby]

Bahahaha...so ive been told!! Lalalala.... ;-D

[Frieda P]

Hey it's a delicacy in Guam or someplace like that, don't knock it til you've tried it Ms Sass ;-)

[redflutterby]

Lol...Ill stick with strawberries!! ;-)xo

[Frieda P]

Ha no kidding missy ;-P x

[redflutterby]

Heehee...xo

[Troy Henson]

If i could dream a dream as beautiful and lustful as this one I would never get out of bed :)

Very nice Frieda.

Regards

[Frieda P]

Me too, I guess I should read this tonight before I go to bed ;-) Thanks Troy.

[Scott Metro]

Very, very nice Frieda...warm and crisp in delivery.
A pleasure to read.

Scotty
xoxo

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Scotty, nice to see you around again. xo

[Scott Metro]

Thank you sweetie..!!!
Scotty
xo

[Frieda P]

Did you figure out those pics yet? x

[Scott Metro]

NO..I wrote admin..but of course they never got back to me...if I can see them..the code must be right or they wouldn't show up for me...a bit strange..my profile has also been tagged.."mature"..wonder if that has something to do with it..???

[Frieda P]

No that wouldn't be it, you can still post the pics...