metaphorical cadence ~

immersed myself aside your metaphorical cadence,

traced your words upon mine own breathless lips 

thoughts of cherished clarity spoke to me 

creating powerful momentum's rush

grasping at anomaly's embrace

poetic destiny's allure upon my skin

danced upon the cobweb's tangle,

sadness left the whirlwind walls

written in translation of braille sighs,

whispered within my spirit's destiny

 earnestly sang the song in my soul

when harmony ceased reverence 

calling  out my name to surrender,

hypnotically entranced

 as your words

 hypothetically

 disappear

yet,

 the

 sentiments

 clung 

within

 my

 heart 

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Poetic destiny's allure upon my skin...they say that good cooking is the way to a man's heart...yeah right, if you want my heart, sit me down (or lay me down preferably) and read poetry to me...muses are commonly addressed in writing, but rarely do the words themselves get acknowledged in this way...of course, leave it to you to break the ground Mrs.R...you always make me think outside the box on every level I can think of...you have equated me with male artists in the past...have you ever noticed that I'm yet to draw any connections for you? It's because you're so unique...you are truly in a league of your own my dear friend :) xo

[Frieda P]

Whoa, you have Mrs R up dancing on the table with that one Benji!! Speechless my dear friend, all I can say is thanks from the bottom of my humble heart. :) xo

[Zahra]

thoughts of cherished clarity spoke to me
creating powerful momentum's rush
grasping at anomaly's embrace

Eloquent, passionate and profound.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

WOW, Frieda, WOW, I loved this poem. :-)

Kaze~

[Chris Micha]

Frieda, you are a poetic master and this is another piece of artistry from your beautiful mind. Bravo my friend! :)

[zephyr]

Wonderful skill and expression, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Sarah.

[Pryde Foltz]

A truly sublime write of whimsy and skill.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Pryde...

[Leslie Philibert]

this a bit concrete, a bit oulipo, full of classy imagery, maybe a bit hard to read due to the font..

[Frieda P]

I must admit I had to google oulipo....thanks so much Leslie, seems a few don't appreciate that font....

[Einstein Noodle]

oh the power of the poem ... making love with words ... love the form you chose .. all those great images reading great poetry out loud; captured in the spell ... trickles down through a wine glass to those blessed soft places of our hearts ... many great lines but have to say these especially speak to me:
"grasping at anomaly's embrace
poetic destiny's allure upon my skin"
wonderful read for me this morning F. thanks for sharing!
E.

[Frieda P]

Oh I love that line 'trickles down through a wine glass to those blessed soft places of our hearts'...you should write that one E!

[Einstein Noodle]

well .... i guess i just did ... because of you dahlink! :)))
E.

[Frieda P]

Ha you have to expand the concept, and don't put any old guys, well you know haha ;-P

[Einstein Noodle]

ok! but honey!! i am the old guy :)))) will you collaborate on the expansion?? i would be very pleased if you do agree!!!!
E.

[Frieda P]

I'd be honored, you want to start this poetic endeavor? ;-)

[Einstein Noodle]

yes .. i certainly do .. i copied the line to my word pad ... check your mail ..
E.

[Frieda P]

Okay, I'm still at work, so I might get interrupted, but have no worries ;-)

[Ruth]

Oh hon...this is so emotionally wrenching and surrendered - stunning! The structure is so beautiful, adds impact - cadence indeed, wonderful! xo

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much gorgeous! xo

[Baby Ricochet]

Lovely and oddly hypnotic. Thank you Frieda

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby, could I make you squawk like a chicken? ha