Boldness of ink ~

Boldness of ink ~

A Poem by Frieda P
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voice clearly purg'd though boldness of inky passages
         echoing that which most words cannot convey
pen cleanses the sins & fortifies the soul
          speaks in volumes of verbose spirit
     weeping in steaks of tearful metaphors,
  bloodied and effervescent on the page
trails of outpouring sentiment's reward
          & emotional trials that translate
               of transcribed tribulations, 
piercing the eye for all to see
   reflections smatter'd upon poetry 
 within redemption's freedom
            & salvation's reality 

© 2014 Frieda P


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this could almost be a sequel to your other poem about sylvia.

she was so strong in her poetry, as she put it she would "eat men like air"

but in real life she played the subservient role she was expected to...and suffered much for it.

love the angst in your poetry...the sarcasm...you are so good at it, my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You're too kind jacob, thanks so much.
Rosalind Gale

10 Years Ago

I agree with my friend Jacob, it is all the things I do love about poetry. Frieda, you are a gem, an.. read more



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transcribed tribulations, !!!!

wonderfully written loved the read and the picture !!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is absolutely brilliant work! I am so very glad I read it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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okay another excellent write...no really it is. however, I have a bigger issue. this was written back in mid April, not the usual productivity from you dear.....so sending you thoughts and hoping you get on your creative stick soon. miss frieda.

Posted 10 Years Ago


to cleanse and accept are such powerful tools if used the right way. Love the notion of the pen as the weapon of choice so to speak to lay down such true thoughts and emotions. You do this so well my friend and may your pen never run out of ink.

Regards


Posted 10 Years Ago


This is another beautiful piece Frieda. I am honored to be able to read such amazing work! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hey Frieda,

Need I tell you again that your poetry is amazing!
I have been gone for a while and will be leaving again tres soon, but i'd thought i'd pop by and read a poem written by a friend :)

Well-Penned!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yep, all that...poetry does all that and then some. It is in the instrument we use to create the beautiful tapestry you weave for us on the regular Frieda. When we enter your pages we have a place to go where we can receive adult enchantment. Your poetry is like Cirque de soleil on papyrus girl.

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Oh! The boldness of ink! Perfect!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I tend to hold it all in as long as I can and squeeze all the inspiration out of it that's possible! :) Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This really is a jewel from the darkness Frieda.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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