Oh I how I love these poems....I have wrote a few myself and I know how much fun they are and at the same time courageous to put them out there...which is why I don't share mine...big chicken....but not you my new friend...Love your style. This is beautiful and daring, feminine and strong. Great work!
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Oh c'mon Pat, put on your big girl pants and publish them! ;)
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LMAO.... I know, right? There was a local poetry club that I use to be in and it was led by a semi-r.. read moreLMAO.... I know, right? There was a local poetry club that I use to be in and it was led by a semi-retired Lit professor and he just loved me and I adored him. However, he use to push me out of comfort zone and make assignments that really challenged me, and the things I wrote I still haven't shared but maybe two of them on my blog a long time ago. I really didn't have a choice because if you skipped challenges more than three a year you were booted because he did this in his spare time and didn't waste time on people who weren't serious. So he waited until I missed two challenges and made the next challenge a poem about masturbation...LOL OMG! So I did one and maybe one day I will share that one. It is tasteful of course and at least I did it but it took me over a week and it is a simple poem but I had such a hard time with it.
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HA now that's brave! After that, you should be able to let anything fly..... ;)
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LOL You would think?
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Hey it's only us, and we won't tell. ;P
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OK I will share it sometime this week ... well I will try anyway :)
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Pfft and tush, just do it girlfriend! ;)
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:) You got it!!!!! Next time I share I will post it. But if it sucks be kind LOL
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If it sucks I don't usually comment, my momma taught me to keep my big trap shut if I have nothing n.. read moreIf it sucks I don't usually comment, my momma taught me to keep my big trap shut if I have nothing nice to say, not as though I ever listened though. haha
LOL I know I was told the same but it didn't stick but you can comment all you want good or bad ...I.. read moreLOL I know I was told the same but it didn't stick but you can comment all you want good or bad ...I can take criticism or I wouldn't be here.
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There's a difference between critiquing a poem and saying it sucks, I'll tell you that in private ha.. read moreThere's a difference between critiquing a poem and saying it sucks, I'll tell you that in private haha
Ha truth be told, I'm afraid of heights, but a girl can dream, can't she? ;) Thanks Jon!
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That she can you'd look good coming out of that plane in red heels! A guy can dream cant he:)))))))).. read moreThat she can you'd look good coming out of that plane in red heels! A guy can dream cant he:))))))))))))))))))) Welcome Frieda:)
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Ha we're just a couple of dreamers eh? If I did ever muster up the courage though, it'd have to be .. read moreHa we're just a couple of dreamers eh? If I did ever muster up the courage though, it'd have to be in red stilettos. ;)
i can not tell you how glad i am you want to go sky diving .. your red stilettos are way enough to convince me to go again :) lets do it!! Simply Red .. another of my favorite bands ...
one of your best again Freida ... all those delicious things that money affords are not as important as
" ....to love
with all the fire & soul
in my heart"
but they sure would be grand .. sets my dream machine in motion AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAh!
i must say you certainly do love with all your fire and soul in your poetry darling! enjoyed this poem a lot ..now when are we taking the jump???
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You know you'd have to push me out of the dang plane E...ha, it's on the bucket list but I doubt it'.. read moreYou know you'd have to push me out of the dang plane E...ha, it's on the bucket list but I doubt it'll ever happen, I think I'd better luck with the yacht and that's not happening haha ;)
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one never can tell ... i love the dream ...maybe i could stow away and beach comb for wine in France.. read moreone never can tell ... i love the dream ...maybe i could stow away and beach comb for wine in France some day .. :)
Hi Frieda. Such a lovely writing. It reminded me of the 100 things I must do before I die. But they don't really matter after all. Love is enough to do the trick. You are a fabulous poetess and have your finger on the pulse of the reader well.
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Thanks so much Divya, you and me both.... let's get this show on the road. :)
The skydive as a metaphor for the drop into the unknown, yet longing for the freedom you'd have as you fall into all kinds of worlds here and there, feeling at home at all of them only because your love feels unrestrained in the new atmospheres within which you existed in. Well done, friend, I enjoyed muchly.
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Thanks muchly Tai, I always enjoy hearing your take.
All of it and I mean all of this poem was magnificent. That is one classy bucket list my friend. I wish all of that for you and more. The presentation was gorgeous as was each event you created with your skillful pen and creative mind. Wow.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..