A bloody apple a day ~

a sortable fairy tale ;)

A bloody apple a day,

keeps snakes, vultures

& worldly gigolos away

bled upon snow so white,

not a carnivorous animal in sight

take your chances in the light

bite the hand that feeds you ~

princess comes out to play

Author's Note

Reviews

[redzone]

I ate that Apple and then offered my hand, neck and heart to fair bloody liped princess.. "She drives me crazy and I can't help myself" ... fair princess, wanna play??!!!! After all it's not often you get the chance to tempt a princess.. this Frieda is a poem of FAERIE TALE proportions with blood on the side... ;0) . ~~redzone

[Frieda P]

Ha be careful what you wish for dear Curt. ;) Grazie mille, good morning and have a grand day my sweet friend. x

[redzone]

I am old enough to know better, but young enough not to give a flying fok .. problem is my wishes hardly ever come true no matter how much I tempt the fates .. go figure!! HA

[redzone]

And you wonderful Frieda, have a great day as well

[Patricia]

well done and a power poem of few words are always a challenge and rare that it is done right...this was done right. Great write Frieda. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Eve started it...it's her fault...

i hate apples...:)

fun poem though

[s y e]

Mama F, you rhymed!!!! ;-) Ha, this was amazing, who knew that one apple could do all that, shocker. Now I will be eating more apples, LMAO! This was really good! Ha. Made me giggle.

[Pryde Foltz]

Scary and effective write, Frieda. But I think snow white has been hanging a little too much with the wicked queen.

Really scary write.

[Frieda P]

Ha perhaps Pryde, thanks.

[redflutterby]

Lol...well I always knew apples were good for something. But I prefer strawberries...far more sweet and juicy. The last two lines are wickedly good... haha!! ;-)x

[Frieda P]

*laughing* here, you and your strawberries! ha...thanks muchly Red. ;-) x

[Lyn Anderson]

Nice. But man, do I hate that song. :)

[Frieda P]

Not my favorite either but I have no jurisdiction over what plays in my head whilst writing. ;P Thanks KL....

[Kleio13]

hahahaha, wouldnt that had worked in the beginning of time. Lovely write Frieda

[Frieda P]

Ha ha now only if we could re-write history. ;)

[Kleio13]

exactly. :)

[Marie]

Snow White was an empty headed idiot. THe wicked stepmother was simply trying to regain her status.

La falta de pomme.

[Frieda P]

Ha Marie, you crack me up....

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. This was so unique and clever. An apple, a frown, a gun( they love it here in the South) will keep them away. Just kidding. Excellent...:)...

[Frieda P]

Ha thanks Sami, gunshots are too messy. ;)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. You are right. Kill them with your love...You are welcome...:)..................

[Frieda P]

Ha not exactly what I had in mind lol

[Sami Khalil]

OK. All good...Take care...:).......................