[paradoxical parenthesis]

[paradoxical parenthesis]

A Poem by Frieda P

paradoxical parenthesis
gypsy wanderings,
excursions
& conceptual volition
people come,
 people stray, 
some even stay
filling a void,
 leaving one behind 
drifting footnotes
 of our lives intentions
departures,
 detours & stop signs
transgressions amidst,
 rambling digressions 
or merely deflections
 in their own deviations
we mourn, rejoice
 and make modifications
revising an alteration
 aside our own
 aberration's fancy,
forever a part of our
 shifting transmutation
within a beguiled
 metaphorical mindfulness,
transposing metamorphosis
 in profound surrender, 
teaching us to dance
 amidst raindrops
as friends, family,
 & foe flutter by ~  


© 2014 Frieda P


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shifting transmutation
within a beguiled
metaphorical mindfulness,
transposing metamorphosis
in profound surrender,
teaching us to dance
amidst raindrops
as friends, family,
& foe flutter by ~

Are you kidding me???? How great are these lines!!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha *smiling* at your statement! Thanks so much, jazz'd you enjoyed my moment!



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The tender webs woven, that indeed we weave ourselves even, beautiful love...a gentle side to vision and wandering thoughts xoxo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Poppy. xo
something to think about, it has left me to ponder the many thoughts that run through my mind. like how it come together. excellent write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your thoughts here Mauricio, haven't seen you in a long while.
You are wise beyond words. Well, except these I suppose. (;

I love this write. It is so genuine and honest. Life is constantly changing, the people in our life are changing. There is never anything that stays the same. The truth in this write is so profound. Fantastic, my dear. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece! xo (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha another one, glad I can fool you guys, was having a moment haha....I meant thanks so much Mads! ;.. read more
This was wonderful Frieda. So much truth and wisdom in those words. You shine amidst raindrops and splatter gently against painful walls. In your mournings you accept life's paradoxes. Excellent...:)......

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago


Thanks muchly for your excellent review Sami, jazz'd you enjoyed this one...
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure. Any time...:)...............
Your wisdom shines in this poem! Isnt that exactly how life works? Its not stagnant...it flows and shifts. So do the people in our lives. If we are lucky the best ones do stay....they even dance within the raindrops with us. Sometimes laughing...other times crying. But they are always holding our hand. This one goes in my favorites... xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Once I got over the 'wisdom' part and choking on my coffee I was able to say thanks Red, you're too .. read more
redflutterby

10 Years Ago

Yes I have my moments...usually delirious ones where I say or do the strangest things. Pfffttt....yo.. read more
redzone

10 Years Ago

Hmmm , Red are you saying that Frieda is a NJ "wise girl"??? Red I'd be careful you know she knows Z.. read more

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Frieda P
Frieda P

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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