shifting transmutation
within a beguiled
metaphorical mindfulness,
transposing metamorphosis
in profound surrender,
teaching us to dance
amidst raindrops
as friends, family,
& foe flutter by ~
Are you kidding me???? How great are these lines!!!!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Ha *smiling* at your statement! Thanks so much, jazz'd you enjoyed my moment!
You are wise beyond words. Well, except these I suppose. (;
I love this write. It is so genuine and honest. Life is constantly changing, the people in our life are changing. There is never anything that stays the same. The truth in this write is so profound. Fantastic, my dear. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece! xo (:
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10 Years Ago
Ha another one, glad I can fool you guys, was having a moment haha....I meant thanks so much Mads! ;.. read moreHa another one, glad I can fool you guys, was having a moment haha....I meant thanks so much Mads! ;-) xo
This was wonderful Frieda. So much truth and wisdom in those words. You shine amidst raindrops and splatter gently against painful walls. In your mournings you accept life's paradoxes. Excellent...:)......
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10 Years Ago
Thanks muchly for your excellent review Sami, jazz'd you enjoyed this one...
Your wisdom shines in this poem! Isnt that exactly how life works? Its not stagnant...it flows and shifts. So do the people in our lives. If we are lucky the best ones do stay....they even dance within the raindrops with us. Sometimes laughing...other times crying. But they are always holding our hand. This one goes in my favorites... xo
Once I got over the 'wisdom' part and choking on my coffee I was able to say thanks Red, you're too .. read moreOnce I got over the 'wisdom' part and choking on my coffee I was able to say thanks Red, you're too kind my friend, when you don't have your whip out ;-) Grazie!! xo
10 Years Ago
Yes I have my moments...usually delirious ones where I say or do the strangest things. Pfffttt....yo.. read moreYes I have my moments...usually delirious ones where I say or do the strangest things. Pfffttt....you are wise...in that joisey wise girl kind of way. You know exactly where to bury the bodys and such.. ;-p. Seriously you are one smart cookie.
10 Years Ago
Hmmm , Red are you saying that Frieda is a NJ "wise girl"??? Red I'd be careful you know she knows Z.. read moreHmmm , Red are you saying that Frieda is a NJ "wise girl"??? Red I'd be careful you know she knows Zio, Vinny and the crew... er.. hi Frieda.. redzone making"tracks" for the border.. ;0)
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..