Hot coffee glances ~

Reminiscing  within gentle quivers,  

   entrancing scent of magnolias  

    wafting on summer breezes, 

early morning's steaming coffee glances

     love scribbles left on the sheets

      in inky true blue sentiment's hue

  a warm embrace around the waist

   wisps of hair flying in moonlight

tender kisses on closed eyes,

   sweet whisper'd  lingerings  upon

    indulgences  of oil drenched skin, 

        breathing in reflections of  spirit's fiery embers

          lit the intensity ablaze in my heart  

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I am slowly but surely attempting to catch up on some of your older pieces, which I didn't get around to reviewing when they were still new...you know I hate missing out on any of your works, but with an imagination a prolific as yours, sometimes things slip through the cracks...you can forgive me for missing the odd one, right Mrs.R? ;)

Two reasons for starting with this one: it's the oldest one of yours in my RR list, and of course, the title...of course, after 67 reviews there isn't much else for even me to say...it takes me about five poems to get that many reviews, but that's beside the point ;P And you can probably surmise the things that are going through my mind as I read this one anyway...it has me thinking, probably more now than I would have been had I read it in April...it's fairly direct by your standards, but as always, it's unmistakably you...I wonder how long it's been since you've read this one yourself...I'm as intrigued by that as I am by the poem, cuz I'm wondering what you'll say when you do ultimately get this review...again, there just isn't much I can say about the poem itself, I can only concur with that everyone else has said...I'll try to get so some of the others as soon as possible love :) xo

[Lauriegirl]

This is a profound and simply amazing piece

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

A romantic and sensual write. I think I'll put some coffee on to brew and scribble for awhile!

[Jo]

Very evocative and romantic. You have some nice memories.

[Claire in VA]

Uh-oh. Now I'm reminiscing.
Super-great piece!
Enjoyed :D

[michele vera]

This Work Was Truly Beyond Word..........It Provided /such LOVE andInspiratio, to Me.......

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

very sweet beautiful and Touching.


lovely music nice touch.



Beautiful stanza's lines.

sweet whisper'd lingerings upon

indulgences of oil drenched skin,

breathing in reflections of spirit's fiery embers

lit the intensity ablaze in my heart




I believe you meant whispered lingering's.

unless you were trying to do whisper'd lingerings



Thank you for sharing this Romantic piece.


Blessings. Kindred poet

[NoelHC]

Very well written, I liked the images you created.

[Frontier]

I really like the coffee glances part, I can easily imagine a gaze like that some morning in a cozy cafe from a interesting stranger. Very romantic poem, good job. I invite you to read my poem Cathedral Eyes since it also talks about eyes, haha.

[WindSong]

Beautiful poem, indeed! A soft and gentle poetic touch for the reader! Great poem!

[Cassie]

This poem has just made me start reminiscing also. Good one as usual my friend. Hope you been well.