When sun sets...

When sun sets

    and children sleep,

springtime dragonflies elicit  

        flower's burst of laughter 

moon comes out to play

  fairies prance on puff'd marshmallow clouds 

awakening silken marmalade skies

     within drenched apricot buttermilk dreams

where lovers deeply sigh 

     dancing in the contentment 

         of a world in slumber'd peace

Author's Note

Reviews

[s y e]

It seems to be that the sunset takes you to magical places.... it gets our brains wishing and hoping. When there is a sunset everything seems perfect and loving.

I loved this one, Mama F, this was written so beautifully and with so much heart and emotion.

xoxo♡

[Frieda P]

Thanks noodlebug, you've been missed sweetpea! xo

[s y e]

I've been right here, silly. You've been missed however. ;-) xoxox

[Frieda P]

Ha oh right, I'm confuzzeled. ;) xo

[s y e]

Ha, what's new? ;-) xo

[Frieda P]

Ha you know my kid drives me batshyte crazy, you better tawk to your bro. ;)

[s y e]

Send him over then ;) but I meant whats new with you being confuzzled! xo

[Sami Khalil]

A breath of fresh air, a renewal of spring, a buttermilk dream and the waves crashing upon hopeful sand. Excellent...:)...

[Frieda P]

Thanks Sami, was having a moment. ;)

[Sami Khalil]

Good. You are wlcome...:).............

[Frieda P]

The buttermilk dreams curdled so I'm back at it again haha ;)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...:)...................

[Frieda P]

;-P

[Sami Khalil]

:)..................

[Frieda P]

You had better bless me again, I'm headed for trouble haha

[Sami Khalil]

Already done...lol

[Einstein Noodle]

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! a deep cleansing breath! "within drenched apricot buttermilk dreams" simply deliciously felt
E.

[Frieda P]

So jazz'd you 'felt' this one E. ;) Grazie mille.........

[Rachelle]

Friend Frieda pirouettes as the sun rests and the moon looks down with approbation as the poet weaves her words magically.

[Frieda P]

Twirling in delight in your sweet words Rachelle, grazie mille. :-)