Love is more profound...

Love is more profound 
   than an intangible feeling
serious play on heartstrings
    within duet's concerto
poetry written on the soul
    of imperfect harmony
graceful dance within turbulence 
     of storm clouds
utterances of understanding
        'tween secret glances

sentiments spoken on lofty clouds,
    scripted in skywriting's destiny
a bond that supersedes
   one's own self-indulgence 
awakening spirit's burning
    desires of body & mind
acceptance in exhalation's dark spaces
     embraces reveling in sparks of
familiarity's illumination
     unfurled in the ecstasy 
        of another's inspirations 
surrender bound of peace & truths
         in mystery's exalted splendor

Amore, je t'aime. ~ in any language...

Author's Note

Reviews

[ron]

You have penned beautifully what love is and feels like Frieda. Fantastic write as always.

[Leslie Philibert]

A poet I enjoy reading, this is a fine poem. I don`t review all of her work, simply due to the quantity of it,and a serious, good review needs more than a few lines. WC as a system tends to encourage poets to get attention by posting a lot, and I`m not sure that is the right way. James Joyce spent a whole day on one line, Tranströmer Collected Poems that won him the Nobel Prize has about 60 poems. So my message is, less is better, especially if WC is seen as way to go forward to more of a future as a writer.

[Rachelle]

Love is acts and action…..

[Deuces]

Love does only count when it's tangible, indeed. That's when you can take advantage of its true benefits. Very calming and warm piece. Graceful dance within turbulence truly describes the emotional trip we take. Je t'aime back!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love is profound indeed but so mysterious that humans fail to understand it… this poem is so full of graceful sentiment it makes the heart want to slow dance to the spoken rythem.

[Einstein Noodle]

such a heart wrenching twisting of human love impressions with a hint of the divine ... i mostly feel empty and sad ... we fail so easily in love .... big hug
E.

[lee von cleef]

Bound the bond that gives, forgives
the pressure
Between two
a life to be ,present
even in each-others absence.
the layers of a touch to infuse, defuse.... each.
Teach teach ,oui oui, oui, Fais de beaux reves.

[FlamingPhoenix]

You captured the definition of love in a stunningly beautiful way. A very enjoyable read full of delightful imagery!

[redflutterby]

There is so many things love is and love isnt. Knowing them makes all the difference in our own happiness. Its not about romantic idealization but rather about the truth and beauty of a real profound emotion between two people. Anything less isnt worth the effort or the dissapointment. You voice the essence of love in this poem...whispered in the lanquage its best understood in. xo