Love is more profound...

Love is more profound 
   than an intangible feeling
serious play on heartstrings
    within duet's concerto
poetry written on the soul
    of imperfect harmony
graceful dance within turbulence 
     of storm clouds
utterances of understanding
        'tween secret glances

sentiments spoken on lofty clouds,
    scripted in skywriting's destiny
a bond that supersedes
   one's own self-indulgence 
awakening spirit's burning
    desires of body & mind
acceptance in exhalation's dark spaces
     embraces reveling in sparks of
familiarity's illumination
     unfurled in the ecstasy 
        of another's inspirations 
surrender bound of peace & truths
         in mystery's exalted splendor

Amore, je t'aime. ~ in any language...

Author's Note

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Superb write of Love and life.

[Cassie]

I agree with Britt, awesome

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is absolutely perfect.

[Mister_Sir]

A beautiful piece, my favourite of the day.
Love transcends all that man can hear and say.
The flow, the metaphors make my heart sway.
That's it; that's all I have to say.

Neurotically yours,
Mister Splitbrain

[Aethereal]

Consciousness is a swirl of colorful moods, and we like it that way. This is a well structured psychological inquiry into the nature of human sensibilities. It seems to me that love is an outcrop of a turbulent mix of moods, a dynamic infinite spectrum of mixed moods (colors) that gives us the sensation of Consciousness. This mix is greater than the sum of infinity. There’s no such thing as a pure mood. Every mood is within of the synergy of Consciousness in connection with every other mood. It’s not possible for Consciousness to be aware of its entire content any more than it‘s possible for us to be aware of every possible color, or mix of colors. Our spectrum of mixed moods is much more than a feeling, much more than we’ll ever be aware of.

[Saddam]

familiarity's illumination
unfurled in the ecstasy
of another's inspirations.

You are such a beautiful poet..... Great one.

[Spacecadet]

Great poem, Frieda. I like the rhythm, the way it flows. You've used some beautiful metaphors. I like the line
"Sentiments spoken on lofty clouds
Scripted in skywriting's destiny"

Good job, friend :)

[Shirlena]

Yes it is...all of that and then probably something we haven't thought of but I believe that you've got this covered in one of the most poetically attractive arrangements I've heard all day. You never ever disappointment as a consummate artist of words.

[star73]

i enjoy all your poems always something beautiful.

[Madalyn Beck]

How is it that I have not read this one yet?! Where was my read request??
Hahaha! Anywhooo, I love this! Love is definitely more profound - when it is the right kind of love, of course. Beautifully penned, my dear, Frieda!

"surrender bound of peace & truths"

Love this line most of all! xo (: