Dark longing Senryu

Dark longing Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P
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Enjoy your Frieday ;-)

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I long for your warmth
your smell, your taste and that touch,
dark as brown sugar

© 2014 Frieda P


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Great insight Frieda. For some people mornings don't start without coffee.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Ya coffee. You had me going with the tittle. Thanks for the cup Frieda

Posted 10 Years Ago


Coffee, poetry, books and music...only left one item out..those are the 5 best things in the whole world!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Coffee is a beautiful thing

Posted 10 Years Ago


How'd I miss this one? Amen to this... I'm nothing without my Java. Nice one, lol.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lol! A perfect ode to that dark master, Frieda!

Posted 10 Years Ago


OMG, I smell coffee, sheeesh, I want! How about we have a coffee party? ;-) I have movies, popcorn and nice warm blankies. Haha.



Posted 10 Years Ago


I like mine on ice
French vanilla is so nice
With two sugars please

Okay I'm delirious this morning....at first I thought this sexy senryu was about me. Then I thought it was about the devil. (Still me). Then I hallucinated that I worked at starbucks and I was taking your order. Now I'm just craving an iced coffee and a shot of liquor. Ughhh...ha

Posted 10 Years Ago


COFEE!!!!!! .The love of my life penned by my favourite chica .Have a great Freiday luv :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I need a Dr. .........I have glass in my throat,
The computer monitor didn't dissolve as I drank the delicious coffee you sent.

Signed your desperate for caffeine friend

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on March 28, 2014
Last Updated on March 28, 2014
Tags: Coffee, Senryu, warmth, smell, touch, taste, dark, brown sugar

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Frieda P
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