Sweet surrender ~

Poetry_words that wrap around the senses of sentiments in motion_ poetry. 

Aim'd at the heart

 sacrificed within soul

       seducing the mind,

 dipped in reflective 

   recollections of

        inquiring eyes

shared as broken bread

   sipped as fine wine

redirected inky flow within

   acquaintance interconnections

surging through inspired veins of

   perception's emancipation

rendering  knowledge in

    fact, fiction or folly's

 familiarity, 

       fantasies written in skywriting's

                 high voltage ecstasy 

insight unto human nature's

   inkind appreciation offered,

  proclamations of good will

            & infinite spirited possibilities 

Sweet surrender in poetry

Author's Note

Reviews

[redflutterby]

All of these things are poetry...every last one. And it is utter bliss to surrender within them! You my friend are a master of wrapping words in so many fabulous ways. We read your poetry and sigh, cry, scream and dream because we are transported beyond the screen we sit in front of!! I love this one...xo

[Frieda P]

Woo doing the happy dance in your words Red, thanks so much, you made my morning! Mwah xo

[icelandicblue]

Sweet surrender unleashes the power and the vulnerability that you reveal with such facility in your poetry. I don't know how you find such beauty and intensity on a daily basis.

[Cryingkate]

Awesome concepts and thoughts here Freida, Beautifully ,skillfully packaged !

[Einstein Noodle]

let poetry reign! i think your poem hits about everything ... nice appreciation ... will you be my therapy?
:)))
E.

[Cryingkate]

There A Py ... just one whiz away... LOL

[Cryingkate]

Sorry, couldn't help myself... that's what I saw in your reply...

[Einstein Noodle]

i am bewildered????? A Py????

[Frieda P]

As if you had to ask E. ;-)

I don't get it either Connie.........

[Cryingkate]

I was afraid you wouldn't get that.... Py sounding as in happy :-) (pee)

[Cryingkate]

Just to re-clarify ........therapy = there a pee.. just one whiz away :-)

[Einstein Noodle]

ohhhhhh am so totally not a text-er .... and completely missed your word play .. ..duh! :)

[Einstein Noodle]

and to the author ..its Frieday today!!!! makes me so happy
E.

[Cryingkate]

no problem.. I'm still trying to wake up. Can't get to the store been without coffee for two days..ughhhhh

[redzone]

Sorry, had to throw down on this Py (whiz) but 2days without out coffee would make anyone er... incoherent.. er.. leaving the room now..

[Cryingkate]

Red, if you got coffee I'm not letting you leave. Einstein Lock the door while I have him pinned down:-)

[Cryingkate]

hurry before Freida gets back and let's him out.

[redzone]

HELP, FRIEDA. Connie and E have me trapped, they want my coffee... noooooooooooo.

[Cryingkate]

Be happy that' all we want Red... It could be much worse you cry baby.
Next time it's your socks and poems :-)

[Cryingkate]

LMBO...........

[AYVID N]

What an awesome way to describe poetry...

"shared as broken bread

sipped as fine wine"

At such times I feel you are divinely inspired Frieda...Another stunning composition!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Divya, you brought a smile to my face this early morning! :-)

[AYVID N]

You are welcome Frieda :)

[Trace]

It takes a different type of talent to create the kind of poetry that you have here.

You see words differently and create masterpieces for the mind.

This is a wonderful example of your abilities.

Greatly enjoyed.
Trace

[Frieda P]

You humble me Trace, thanks so much.

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is so wonderful, Frieda! :]

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Brittany. :-)

[Lyn Anderson]

This is another strong write about Poetry. I liked it a lot, but I think the use of inkind was great.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much KL.

[Jen Yarrington]

This makes me think of how, when you know you have something to say and it just has to get out, in just the right way, nothing can stop you from creating the masterpiece that is hidden inside of you. Very artful and beautiful to read.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your thoughts Jen, muchly appreciated.

[paddy d daly]

Some great lines in this one, love the alliteration near the end, nice one missus, ( see you like earth wind and fire too :-)

[Frieda P]

Yep, how could you not, thanks irish. ;-)

[Tate Morgan]

You and your fantasies. I bit of wisdom in this one frieda. If we were 20 again we would never be sitting down long enough to write lol

[Frieda P]

Oh brother, you're such a killjoy Tate. ;-)

[Tate Morgan]

HAHAHAyou and i need to meet for a drink one night

[Frieda P]

Only if you wear that sexy cowboy getup....haha