Sweet surrender ~

Poetry_words that wrap around the senses of sentiments in motion_ poetry. 

Aim'd at the heart

 sacrificed within soul

       seducing the mind,

 dipped in reflective 

   recollections of

        inquiring eyes

shared as broken bread

   sipped as fine wine

redirected inky flow within

   acquaintance interconnections

surging through inspired veins of

   perception's emancipation

rendering  knowledge in

    fact, fiction or folly's

 familiarity, 

       fantasies written in skywriting's

                 high voltage ecstasy 

insight unto human nature's

   inkind appreciation offered,

  proclamations of good will

            & infinite spirited possibilities 

Sweet surrender in poetry

Author's Note

Reviews

[redflutterby]

All of these things are poetry...every last one. And it is utter bliss to surrender within them! You my friend are a master of wrapping words in so many fabulous ways. We read your poetry and sigh, cry, scream and dream because we are transported beyond the screen we sit in front of!! I love this one...xo

[Frieda P]

Woo doing the happy dance in your words Red, thanks so much, you made my morning! Mwah xo

[Michael Stevens]

Quite the beautiful poem, Frieda!

[Kent Clark]

this is very good. i loved reading it.

[Madalyn Beck]

A beautiful piece of poetry about how beautiful poetry is. You have done another superb job with this, my dear! I love your work and this is definitely at the top of my list! xo :)

[Ahena MK]

wonderfully written ..... loved the title !!

[uberteff]

I read this part over and over and over again...!
" dipped in reflective
recollections of
inquiring eyes"

[KeeD]

Sophisticated poetry which makes a very sensual read. Flows very well, has that groove that makes you feel sexy about life. Definitely a potion of words i'd recommend to up the mood D: great write!

[BlackRose]

Great way to describe the poetry written in many ways, from the heart, mind soul, and experiences. Fab piece.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Everything that we can imagine we can write .Poetry gives us this awesome power.You Lady got double doses lol .Another gem chica :)

[Aethereal]

What a wonderful tribute to mankind's emancipating relationship with poetic ink-kind, or inkind.

[Emerald Seas]

What a wonderfully written 'ode to poetry'
I'm glad to see, no matter how infrequent my visits of late, you always have something new posted for my eyes and soul to drink in. Lovely read, Frieda!