Sweet surrender ~

Poetry_words that wrap around the senses of sentiments in motion_ poetry. 

Aim'd at the heart

 sacrificed within soul

       seducing the mind,

 dipped in reflective 

   recollections of

        inquiring eyes

shared as broken bread

   sipped as fine wine

redirected inky flow within

   acquaintance interconnections

surging through inspired veins of

   perception's emancipation

rendering  knowledge in

    fact, fiction or folly's

 familiarity, 

       fantasies written in skywriting's

                 high voltage ecstasy 

insight unto human nature's

   inkind appreciation offered,

  proclamations of good will

            & infinite spirited possibilities 

Sweet surrender in poetry

Author's Note

Reviews

[redflutterby]

All of these things are poetry...every last one. And it is utter bliss to surrender within them! You my friend are a master of wrapping words in so many fabulous ways. We read your poetry and sigh, cry, scream and dream because we are transported beyond the screen we sit in front of!! I love this one...xo

[Frieda P]

Woo doing the happy dance in your words Red, thanks so much, you made my morning! Mwah xo

[A Soap Mess Stories]

I loved this...and I loved the song from Earth Wind and Fire...Fantasy...

[jackie]

Your poem was very enlightened.

[MBUYISA]

wow... that a very nice poem..
i like the structure, it's makes it easy to read and understand
thank you again

[Tai Ryens]

You write of poetry so beautifully and I must say, I particularly like poems that speak of expression due to it revealing how the writer perceives their world in comparison to others. Writing probably does indeed pertain to our own memories and feelings, amplifying intensity to suit different kinds of situations and emotions. Well done.

[Jvl narasimharao]

sweet surrender to the poetic muse

[sushi]

It goes like a song.... Loved it...

[Oyindamola Shoola]

you aimed at my chest and this poem shot through my heart.....well penned

[MariaDahl1791]

I agree with redflutterby, this was really good. I really enjoyed it. I am anxious for more of your writing.

[Winslow Des Totes]

This was very interesting in that its imagery was simple but very potent. I like the style and flow of this piece very much! Great thought provoking write!

[Tina Louise UK]

Wonderful piece hun...loved it :) x