Sweet surrender ~

Poetry_words that wrap around the senses of sentiments in motion_ poetry. 

Aim'd at the heart

 sacrificed within soul

       seducing the mind,

 dipped in reflective 

   recollections of

        inquiring eyes

shared as broken bread

   sipped as fine wine

redirected inky flow within

   acquaintance interconnections

surging through inspired veins of

   perception's emancipation

rendering  knowledge in

    fact, fiction or folly's

 familiarity, 

       fantasies written in skywriting's

                 high voltage ecstasy 

insight unto human nature's

   inkind appreciation offered,

  proclamations of good will

            & infinite spirited possibilities 

Sweet surrender in poetry

Author's Note

Reviews

[redflutterby]

All of these things are poetry...every last one. And it is utter bliss to surrender within them! You my friend are a master of wrapping words in so many fabulous ways. We read your poetry and sigh, cry, scream and dream because we are transported beyond the screen we sit in front of!! I love this one...xo

[Frieda P]

Woo doing the happy dance in your words Red, thanks so much, you made my morning! Mwah xo

[-Scribe in Style-]

Beautifully expressed. It is what poetry is and it is definitely what we poets aim to do!
Nicely written.
A

[Dark Empress]

I enjoyed reading this. Wonderful poem

[Dominique Lambright]

I loved all the words that you used in this poem :)

[FocusedAmnesia]

The format and flow of this piece is absolutely captivating. Great read:]

[Ravyne Hawke]

I love the flow of this.. a river of beautiful prose.

[FlamingPhoenix]

This is so beautifully written and so very true! The following lines are brilliant and have been permanently etched in my mind!
"seducing the mind,
dipped in reflective
recollections of
inquiring eyes
shared as broken bread
sipped as fine wine"

[WE]

your words are of a constant beauty excellent write

[prachi prangya agasti]

its lovely.... brilliant flow with words.... word-crafting done in fabulous way....

[Zahra]

beautifuly done, every line's wonderful. Exquisite

[Rachelle]

The poetic danseuse waltzes with her words again!!!!