Dancing on pipe dream clouds ~

Dancing on pipe dream clouds

within the realm of promises

castles in bauble's celebrations

prancing in gaiety upon

chimera's contemplative infatuation

confections floating on aria's burst'd ambiance

burbles of shots in the dark

gambling reflections merely surmis'd

wishing on stardust's elusive possibilities 

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

You never fail to envelop me into your world of words Mrs.R...everything you write is pure magic. Dancing on pipe dream clouds...feels like everything not involving depression and loneliness is a pipe dream these days. Stirring up so much positivity and negativity is something only your talent can do. My poems sport one mood and that is all. Another jaw-dropping peace from the pen of Frieda, ho-hum ;D xo

[Frieda P]

Your words are magic Benji, doing the happy dance...grazie! ;-P xo

[kublakhan27]

I've said it before but you know I love making you dance Mrs.R :) xo

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the words "Pipe dreams." One of my Grandfather favorite quote was. "Don't bet on those pipe dreams. They will break your heart and your back." Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Lovely poem! The beauty of the sky comes from its vastness, symbolizing inspiration for all of the possibilities that can take place in our lives.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Cascara, muchly appreciated.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

my pleasure xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very blissful and charming poem… it certainly tickled my fancy when reading it.

[Frieda P]

Oh you know how muchly I love to tickle your fancy dear. ;-) Grazie.

[Madalyn Beck]

Stunning! You left your words dancing around me with this. Fantastic write, my dear! xo :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly for joining me on my cloud Madalyn! ;-) xo

[Michael Stevens]

Keep on dancing, Frieda, you never know, one of those pipe dreams just may come true; excellent poem!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Michael, jazz'd you enjoyed this one!

[Traci]

Always a fan of your writes dear friend, you have a way with words that surpasses.....
Truly soulful, stirring emotions, as we hold on to those pipe dream clouds, finding strength and hope in times of darkness. Another favorite.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much sweet Traci, I love the insight of your review.

[Tina Louise UK]

Another gorgeous piece from your perfect pen! Love it :) x

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Tia, jazz'd you enjoyed. :-) x

[Cryingkate]

Sorry to be the bearer of bad news but those pipeline clouds are called Chemtrails.
Umm they are toxic and poisoning :-)

[Frieda P]

Ha every party has a pooper.... That's nice. ;-)

[Cryingkate]

uh oh.... Your just too fun to tease.. I see a pattern developing.
In scene one take two.. I enjoyed dancing in your pipe clouds.. It's a fun dance to wake up to.
The choreography is awesome as usual.

[Frieda P]

Take two of...., oh never mind ;-P I meant thanks....

[Cryingkate]

LOL hey what cloud you on anyway? Did I pick the wrong cloud cluster?

[Frieda P]

South of nine...ha ;-P

[Cryingkate]

Oh no wonder, sorry I'll have to another flight unless I can catch a ride with Gabriel on his next pass.
See Ya soon......

[Frieda P]

Ha....you know I'm not familiar with this Gabriel fella of whom you speak.....

[Cryingkate]

hint: He gets high and flys around on wings and his head is a lampshade for the halo light

[Frieda P]

Oh lamp shades on the head, that's one I can relate to lol

[Cryingkate]

ROFL... Thats's better then That's Nice.....PMPL

[Cryingkate]

peeing myself laughing Oh so I guess it's PML before U ask...

[Frieda P]

Perhaps I should look up this Gab after all ;-P

[Cryingkate]

Surely you must indeed. He might have extra coupons on lampshades.
I mean what other proper way to greet all those parents morning and afternoons?
You must keep your appearances.

[Frieda P]

Oh I've got that down pat after all these years...they'd never know I was batshyte crazy! ha

[Cryingkate]

ha you don't fool me... You think that halo & lampshade proves your lights are on....
I bet you self confess and they figure they can trust a self confessor it's the ones in the shadow to worry about.:-)

[Frieda P]

I dwell in both places, that keeps em guessing. ;-)

[Cryingkate]

Kool it's not a divided house. It's a Multi-house dwelling. The Saints would be proud of you :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Outstanding poem Frieda, loved it!

Kaze~

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Kazie! :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome friend. :-)

[Simran Kewlani]

Your words have this power to grab people using their beauty. (:

[Frieda P]

What a sweet thing to say, thanks Simran. :-)

[Simran Kewlani]

You're welcome. (: