Dancing on pipe dream clouds ~

Dancing on pipe dream clouds

within the realm of promises

castles in bauble's celebrations

prancing in gaiety upon

chimera's contemplative infatuation

confections floating on aria's burst'd ambiance

burbles of shots in the dark

gambling reflections merely surmis'd

wishing on stardust's elusive possibilities 

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

You never fail to envelop me into your world of words Mrs.R...everything you write is pure magic. Dancing on pipe dream clouds...feels like everything not involving depression and loneliness is a pipe dream these days. Stirring up so much positivity and negativity is something only your talent can do. My poems sport one mood and that is all. Another jaw-dropping peace from the pen of Frieda, ho-hum ;D xo

[Frieda P]

Your words are magic Benji, doing the happy dance...grazie! ;-P xo

[kublakhan27]

I've said it before but you know I love making you dance Mrs.R :) xo

[star73]

Negativity I know that feeling very well and it sucks especially when had to deal with it from your own mother can't get away from it I try to stay positive but some days are harder and yes pipe dreams like being rich or a dream job that seems like it's never going to happen nice write amazing job again:)

[Einstein Noodle]

pipe dream promises, prancing baubles, exploding arias ambiance, and burbles of shots ... its your mind i love the most dear Freida... i agree with everybody .. and i am always struck with wonderment over your poetry .. every line stand alone and sparks my imagination meditation :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Frieda... Your poetry reminds me of
stained glass windows in a Cathedral
reflecting rainbow colors on the
Pillars of my heart. You have an
amazing gift... so beautiful.
truly... Pat

[FlamingPhoenix]

Perfect song choice for another masterpiece in poetry! You never cease to impress and amaze me.

[Ravyne Hawke]

beautiful imagery.. a lovely dream indeed!

[prachi prangya agasti]

dancing on pipe dream clouds.... mesmerizing nd again a great piece from you....

[Angel]

For this dance, I shall need my pink leotards, my feather'd tu tu, and my little silver dancing shoes...

[Devesh]

Lovely write, William...gives me a cheerful feeling :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Better to dance on pipe dreams than not dance at all... Your words glide across the page, Frieda!