~ capricious whimsy

I crash

        into my dreams 

               paint'd with feather'd

                 ginger brushstrokes, 

         sumptuous watercolor awash

                               in dripping

                                     imagination's blithe

        seemingly 

                    endless allusion's

                        dreaming awake in

                      

                            heedful disposition's regard

             taffeta angel's render'd bliss

                       dancing, effortlessly

  

                              upon my palate's

                                         every desirous 

                                                    capricious whimsy  

Author's Note

Reviews

[Bright Ocean Star]

Frieda, this poem reminds me of an oil painter gently applying choice colors of paint carefully to the canvas...it is beautiful and whimsical. "seemingly endless allusion's dreaming awake in heedful disposition's regard." I'm not sure what it means, but it sounds absolutely beautiful. Can't wait to read your other works of art.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for such a glowing review Anne, muchly appreciated.

[Angel]

Take me away, take me to the land of dream
Where taffeta angels dance on clouds made of cream
Where colors sing, and music's aglow
To the place that only children know...

[Frieda P]

Oh that's special Angel, thanks so much.

[Avinash]

Riot of colors created by words which can find parallels only in heaven :)

[Frieda P]

Thank you for such an exquisite review Avinash. :-)

[Madalyn Beck]

Sweet and beautiful. I love where you took me with this. I felt as if I was in this artists brush strokes. Fantastic work! xo :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your sweet review Madalyn. :-) xo

[Michael Stevens]

You've captured beautifully the essence of dreaming and daydreaming, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Michael!

[Einstein Noodle]

delightful .. i just kind of floated through the form alone ..(love that) and your words paint the intended picture ... so light ... so wistful ...

deaming off now ...
thank you!

E.

[Frieda P]

Thanks E, so glad you're dreaming now......

[Ahena MK]

Really really good , wonderful

[Frieda P]

Thanks Ahena.

[sharonlee]

Ahhh... the sweet dulcet phrasing of whimsy... adorable.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much sharonlee, nice to see you back again.

[Tina Louise UK]

Simply stunning! Love this one...gorgeous hun :) x

[Frieda P]

Thanks luv, so jazz'd you did. :-) x

[icelandicblue]

Dreaming while awake and dancing within your whimsy. It is a breath of fresh air for one's soul. I love the entire piece.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, Anne, glad you enjoyed this one.

[Simran Kewlani]

These words are just amazing. The theme of this poem is beautiful. (:

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Simran. :-)