I have wanted to comment on this heart filled poem, but honestly didn't think I could say anything that would do justice to your artististic efforts. I have come back to it, actually it has drawn me back many times now, it's like it owns me or something, HA. I know, strange huh! I think of these lines often: reminding me
of twinklin'
diamond glints
in your
come hither eyes
& the warmth
of your touch ~
And I think about the colors of early morning and twilight, of the way it's a time for walks and holding hands and telling all the secrets that make us who we are... it's a time for risking everything..... Frieda, it's just simply beautiful.
~~redzone
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thanks for your humbling review Curt, muchly appreciated. x
This is pure magic....twilight in all its amazing granduer! Your words make me long to sit on the beach with a margarita to enjoy the sight. Sigh... ;-)xo
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Sounds like a perfect plan to me, thanks Red ;-) xo
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..