I have wanted to comment on this heart filled poem, but honestly didn't think I could say anything that would do justice to your artististic efforts. I have come back to it, actually it has drawn me back many times now, it's like it owns me or something, HA. I know, strange huh! I think of these lines often: reminding me
of twinklin'
diamond glints
in your
come hither eyes
& the warmth
of your touch ~
And I think about the colors of early morning and twilight, of the way it's a time for walks and holding hands and telling all the secrets that make us who we are... it's a time for risking everything..... Frieda, it's just simply beautiful.
~~redzone
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thanks for your humbling review Curt, muchly appreciated. x
Frieda, It was beautiful. It was captivating. Thank you for sharing it. I love to go sit outside and watch the moonlit sky. I love the sea blues and pink shimmering purples. I think your poem perfectly captures this wonderful time of day/night.
This is a beautiful love poem. We rally round the glory of the Moon to discover what we have in common with it, and in doing so we admire each other all the more. Everything in our universe is interconnected.
You know I try to offer in-depth reviews with every piece I read Mrs.R, but given the volume of input you've already received, and the general awe that you've left me in here, I can only sigh in rapt admiration. I salute your poetic genius with the utmost conviction...you have once again proven that you are the best poet on this site...just incredible...xo
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
You truly humble me Steve, thanks so much for your kind words my sweet friend. xo
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..