~ Moonrise, Moonset ~

I sigh 

in light

 of the moon, 

hung so low

     unfolding

 early morns

of the skies' 

        soothing  

iridescent pinks 

   in sea blue depths

sun reflecting 

     off its face                         

enraptur'd

thoughts again,

as twilight 

    seeks

a brilliant

finale in

  showy illumination

taking a bow

dipping in its

   amethyst glow

reminding me

  of twinklin'

 diamond glints

   in your 

  come hither eyes

   & the warmth

       of your touch ~

 hopelessly

   unfurl'd

    in lit  

    shadows

Author's Note

Reviews

[redzone]

I have wanted to comment on this heart filled poem, but honestly didn't think I could say anything that would do justice to your artististic efforts. I have come back to it, actually it has drawn me back many times now, it's like it owns me or something, HA. I know, strange huh! I think of these lines often: reminding me
of twinklin'
diamond glints
in your
come hither eyes
& the warmth
of your touch ~
And I think about the colors of early morning and twilight, of the way it's a time for walks and holding hands and telling all the secrets that make us who we are... it's a time for risking everything..... Frieda, it's just simply beautiful.
~~redzone

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your humbling review Curt, muchly appreciated. x

[star73]

love it as always thanks for sharing!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautiful just Beaitful. ^_^

Kaze~

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Kazie. :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome Frieda! :-)

[Deron Alexis]

Its like you took your nyctophilia and then related it to a person's qualities, which is awesome. Staying up late and loving the night is better when someone else can share it with you but not just anyone some one who understands you and gets you to the point of comfort and a lack so secrecy intimate enough to feel joy and pain as one .....the night itself is beautiful but if it could form a backdrop to a person's love it becomes magic thank u for this Frieda

[Frieda P]

So nice to see you back Deron, where have you been hiding out my friend, thanks so much for your kind words.

[Deron Alexis]

i visit when i can.... exams are in may and i have add maths first :

[Frieda P]

Ew math, a four letter word, well good luck with that....

[Deron Alexis]

Mentally Affected Teachers Harassing Students

[Frieda P]

HA good acrostic....

[Deron Alexis]

got it from my math genius friend O.o

[Shirlena]

The colors indicative of the poem and vice versa...shows how a good word is the same as a brush stroke...they both create such beautiful things that can take our imagination where we love to go. I want to revel in the hues and I do. Gorgeous stuff Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Shirlena, jazz'd you enjoyed this one.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

As a lover of celestial beauty, I definitely fell in love with this poem! :)

Comparing such beauty to your lover's eyes is a splendid compliment.

Gorgeous poem, overall.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your glowing review, muchly appreciated. :-)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

my pleasure

[Simran Kewlani]

I love this poem. Considering, the theme you've used. It's very well written. (:

[Cassie]

Ohh Frieda, I don't know how to review this one, I could say it has touched the very core of my heart...this is really nice and calming. this is the kind of poem I would love to read every day.

[sharonlee]

Ethereal and beautifully composed Frieda. Hoping you are well.

[Mark]

It gives me a warm image of a soft summer day and evening. The apostrophes grow fewer. That's nice as well. :p