I have wanted to comment on this heart filled poem, but honestly didn't think I could say anything that would do justice to your artististic efforts. I have come back to it, actually it has drawn me back many times now, it's like it owns me or something, HA. I know, strange huh! I think of these lines often: reminding me
of twinklin'
diamond glints
in your
come hither eyes
& the warmth
of your touch ~
And I think about the colors of early morning and twilight, of the way it's a time for walks and holding hands and telling all the secrets that make us who we are... it's a time for risking everything..... Frieda, it's just simply beautiful.
~~redzone
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for your humbling review Curt, muchly appreciated. x
I have wanted to comment on this heart filled poem, but honestly didn't think I could say anything that would do justice to your artististic efforts. I have come back to it, actually it has drawn me back many times now, it's like it owns me or something, HA. I know, strange huh! I think of these lines often: reminding me
of twinklin'
diamond glints
in your
come hither eyes
& the warmth
of your touch ~
And I think about the colors of early morning and twilight, of the way it's a time for walks and holding hands and telling all the secrets that make us who we are... it's a time for risking everything..... Frieda, it's just simply beautiful.
~~redzone
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for your humbling review Curt, muchly appreciated. x
Its like you took your nyctophilia and then related it to a person's qualities, which is awesome. Staying up late and loving the night is better when someone else can share it with you but not just anyone some one who understands you and gets you to the point of comfort and a lack so secrecy intimate enough to feel joy and pain as one .....the night itself is beautiful but if it could form a backdrop to a person's love it becomes magic thank u for this Frieda
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
So nice to see you back Deron, where have you been hiding out my friend, thanks so much for your kin.. read moreSo nice to see you back Deron, where have you been hiding out my friend, thanks so much for your kind words.
10 Years Ago
i visit when i can.... exams are in may and i have add maths first :
10 Years Ago
Ew math, a four letter word, well good luck with that....
The colors indicative of the poem and vice versa...shows how a good word is the same as a brush stroke...they both create such beautiful things that can take our imagination where we love to go. I want to revel in the hues and I do. Gorgeous stuff Frieda.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thanks muchly Shirlena, jazz'd you enjoyed this one.
Ohh Frieda, I don't know how to review this one, I could say it has touched the very core of my heart...this is really nice and calming. this is the kind of poem I would love to read every day.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..