yesterday's verse

Broken poetry lost its rhyme

     etched in a fit of raging volition 

sketchy melodrama pluck'd center stage

    took a forced bow in gust's emotions

genuflected in yesterday's feather'd verse

       perused of prayer's sing song devotion

darkly caged birds chirp'd manifestations  

     verbiage's repulsed twist of fate

took a dive off metaphorical mental cliffs

      landed in puddle of ingrate's diction

paradox of loquacity's silent stares   

       argued mediocrity's sublimity at

           quarter to insanity of rhythm'd time 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

crashed on the rocks due to expression .. the raven or blackbirds are apt omens ..
" quarter to insanity of rhythm'd time " ... its dictates a demanding lover ..o rhyme o rhyme o rhyme ..somebody help me please ... wonderful dark poem from the writer
E.

[Frieda P]

Many apologies for missing this luverly review E...the cafe messes with my head & my alerts. You wonder why my rhyme is insane? ;)

[Zahra]

verbiage's repulsed twist of fate

took a dive off metaphorical mental cliffs
Perfect, loved this piece. So beautifully worded

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, jazz'd you enjoyed.

[Saddam]

First of all I will praise your art of choosing graph, it is awesome and saying most part of your poetry. Writing, once again you have shown your ability of singing. Great. This is very nice lines

took a forced bow in gust's emotions
genuflected in yesterday's feather'd verse
perused of prayer's sing song devotion

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your kind words Ssadd.

[ron]

This is so far above my head, but it has a flow that just carries me through to the end.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for making the effort ron...appreciate it.

[ron]

Your most welcome Frieda

[Frieda P]

Sometimes I get too deep for my own britches...

[ron]

Lol...na your good.

[Relic]

I don't understand how you can write something so fast with all the complicated words. haha I don't think anyone will pick up on what it's about though.

Alice n chains is awesome. Or should I say was awesome before the singer's demise.

Always a creative write from you Frieda. You're a good friend.

[Frieda P]

Well now that you highlighted it, they might take it there! I think you're underestimating the mind of a poet anywho... Ha, have to go with the flow or you piss off the muse, and you know how that goes....thanks muchly Relic.

[Relic]

Welcome Frieda.